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Type

enhancement, documentation, other

Description

Added detailed game scenarios and QR code placements for a city exploration game in Parcours/ville/Postes.md.
Documented agile project management practices including sprint planning and daily meetings in Gestion de projet/Rapport/Introduction et mise en place.md.
Implemented a quantitative survey for market research in Étude de marché/Questionnaire/Quantitatif/Quantitatif.md.
Recorded a weekly project meeting discussing adjustments in project scope and management in PVs/WeeklyPVs/PV Weekly 27.03.2024.md.
Enhanced benchmark analysis with detailed comparisons and insights in benchmark/benchmark.md.
Summarized UX research and proposed non-visual interaction techniques in ui-ux/Rapport.md.
Implemented an Obsidian plugin for dynamic image caption management in .obsidian/plugins/image-captions/main.js.
Established a framework for storytelling in guided tours in Parcours/Storytelling/Storytelling - Cadre général.md.
Drafted a letter of intent for B2B collaboration with local merchants in b2b/Lettre d'intention.md.
Structured an initial contact questionnaire for local merchants in b2b/Commerçants - 1er contact.md.

Changes walkthrough

Relevant files

Enhancement

5 files

Postes.md `Add Game Scenarios and QR Code Details for City Exploration Game` Parcours/ville/Postes.md Added detailed game scenarios and QR code placements for a city exploration game involving multiple posts. Each post includes child and parent clues, QR code locations, and interactive game elements. Enhanced storytelling elements to engage participants throughout the game.	+168/-0
Quantitatif.md `Implement Quantitative Survey for Market Research` Étude de marché/Questionnaire/Quantitatif/Quantitatif.md Provided a link to a Google Forms survey for quantitative analysis. Detailed the structure and purpose of the quantitative questionnaire aimed at understanding family habits and technology use. Included demographic analysis and preferences for mobile app technologies among families.	+77/-0
benchmark.md `Enhance Benchmark Analysis with Detailed Comparisons and Insights` benchmark/benchmark.md Updated the benchmark analysis with detailed comparisons of similar applications and functionalities. Added insights into gamification features and user interaction methods from various apps. Enhanced the benchmark with visual aids and links to external resources for deeper analysis.	+67/-2
main.js `Implement Obsidian Plugin for Dynamic Image Caption Management` .obsidian/plugins/image-captions/main.js Implemented a plugin for Obsidian to manage image captions dynamically within the editor. Added functionality to update captions based on image metadata and user settings. Ensured compatibility with Obsidian's markdown rendering process.	+129/-0
Storytelling - Cadre général.md `Establish Framework for Storytelling in Guided Tours` Parcours/Storytelling/Storytelling - Cadre général.md Established a general framework for storytelling within the app's guided tours. Created engaging narratives to enhance user experience during the tours. Structured the storytelling to maintain consistency across different tours.	+29/-0

Documentation

5 files

Introduction et mise en place.md `Document Agile Project Management Practices and Tools` Gestion de projet/Rapport/Introduction et mise en place.md Detailed the project management setup for an agile project including team organization and sprint planning. Described the use of tools like GitHub Projects and Obsidian for task management and documentation. Outlined daily and retrospective meeting structures to enhance team communication and project tracking.	+57/-0
PV Weekly 27.03.2024.md `Record Weekly Project Meeting and Discuss Project Adjustments` PVs/WeeklyPVs/PV Weekly 27.03.2024.md Documented a weekly project meeting discussing project challenges and adjustments in project scope and management. Highlighted the need for a detailed project specification and better task management. Discussed the roles and responsibilities within the project team to improve project execution.	+75/-0
Rapport.md `Summarize UX Research and Propose Non-Visual Interaction Techniques` ui-ux/Rapport.md Outlined preliminary UX research findings and their implications for app design. Discussed non-visual interaction techniques to reduce screen time during family activities. Proposed a taxonomy and ontology for organizing app content and improving user navigation.	+67/-0
Lettre d`intention.md `Draft Letter of Intent for B2B Collaboration with Local Merchants` b2b/Lettre d`intention.md Drafted a letter of intent for business-to-business collaboration with local merchants. Outlined the benefits and commitments involved in participating in the appY project. Provided a template for merchants to express their interest and specify their contributions.
Commerçants - 1er contact.md `Structure Initial Contact Questionnaire for Local Merchants` b2b/Commerçants - 1er contact.md Compiled a structured questionnaire for initial contact with local merchants. Included questions to gauge merchants' perceptions of the city and their business challenges. Aimed to assess the potential impact of the appY project on local commerce.	+22/-4

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Best practice	Use `const` for variable declarations to ensure block scoping and avoid scope-related issues. ___ Consider using `const` instead of `var` for defining functions and variables to ensure they are block-scoped, which helps in preventing accidental global variable declarations and other scope-related bugs. [.obsidian/plugins/image-captions/main.js [6-12]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-7385594ef6952c8e0560e825db64a94d9e7b1dce3a744c42d19f2d4c78b5ddf6R6-R12) ```diff -var __defProp = Object.defineProperty; -var __getOwnPropDesc = Object.getOwnPropertyDescriptor; -var __getOwnPropNames = Object.getOwnPropertyNames; -var __hasOwnProp = Object.prototype.hasOwnProperty; -var __export = (target, all) => { - for (var name in all) +const __defProp = Object.defineProperty; +const __getOwnPropDesc = Object.getOwnPropertyDescriptor; +const __getOwnPropNames = Object.getOwnPropertyNames; +const __hasOwnProp = Object.prototype.hasOwnProperty; +const __export = (target, all) => { + for (const name in all) __defProp(target, name, { get: all[name], enumerable: true }); }; ```
Best practice	Use `let` in loops to ensure the loop variable is block-scoped. ___ Replace the use of `var` with `let` in loops to avoid potential issues with variable hoisting and ensure that the loop variable is block-scoped. [.obsidian/plugins/image-captions/main.js [10-12]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-7385594ef6952c8e0560e825db64a94d9e7b1dce3a744c42d19f2d4c78b5ddf6R10-R12) ```diff -for (var name in all) +for (let name in all) __defProp(target, name, { get: all[name], enumerable: true }); ```
Enhancement	Use template literals for string concatenation to enhance code readability. ___ Use template literals for string concatenation to improve readability and maintainability of the code. [.obsidian/plugins/image-captions/main.js [96]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-7385594ef6952c8e0560e825db64a94d9e7b1dce3a744c42d19f2d4c78b5ddf6R96-R96) ```diff -return "[[" + linktext + "]]"; +return `[[${linktext}]]`; ```
	Convert `NodeList` to an array using `Array.from` for better method compatibility. ___ Use `Array.from` to convert `NodeList` to an array for better compatibility with array methods and improved code readability. [.obsidian/plugins/image-captions/main.js [126]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-7385594ef6952c8e0560e825db64a94d9e7b1dce3a744c42d19f2d4c78b5ddf6R126-R126) ```diff -return child.childNodes; +return Array.from(child.childNodes); ```
	Use `for...of` loop with `async/await` for better control over asynchronous operations. ___ Consider using `async/await` consistently in asynchronous functions for better readability and error handling. [.obsidian/plugins/image-captions/main.js [102-106]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-7385594ef6952c8e0560e825db64a94d9e7b1dce3a744c42d19f2d4c78b5ddf6R102-R106) ```diff -el.findAll("img:not(.emoji)").forEach(async (img) => { +for (const img of el.findAll("img:not(.emoji)")) { const captionText = getCaptionText(img); const parent = img.parentElement; if (parent && (parent == null ? void 0 : parent.nodeName) !== "FIGURE" && captionText && captionText !== img.getAttribute("src")) { await insertFigureWithCaption(img, parent, captionText, ctx.sourcePath, plugin); } -}); +} ```
	Improve sentence clarity and conciseness. ___ Consider revising the sentence structure for clarity and conciseness. The current phrasing is somewhat redundant and could be streamlined for better readability. [Marketing/Guide pour la communication.md [7]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-5c98f0ecc5cc04345fa1b88340af7441369b28ac8af08259d292f091165e5b5aR7-R7) ```diff -Nous souhaitons parler avec un ton encourageant et enthousiaste en laissant libre choix à l’enfant. +Nous adoptons un ton encourageant et enthousiaste, laissant le choix libre à l’enfant. ```
	Enhance description for clearer communication strategy. ___ Consider using more specific language to enhance the description of the interaction between the mascots and the children. [Marketing/Guide pour la communication.md [42]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-5c98f0ecc5cc04345fa1b88340af7441369b28ac8af08259d292f091165e5b5aR42-R42) ```diff -Techniquement : Violette et Brumus en intéraction, bulles de textes simples et en “tu”. +Techniquement : Violette et Brumus interagissent directement avec les enfants à travers des bulles de texte simples et personnalisées. ```
	Improve text flow and reduce redundancy. ___ To avoid redundancy and improve the flow of the text, consider merging these two sentences into one. [Marketing/Guide pour la communication.md [36]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-5c98f0ecc5cc04345fa1b88340af7441369b28ac8af08259d292f091165e5b5aR36-R36) ```diff -C’est la communication hors ligne qui va atteindre les enfants principalement (affiches, bus, merch, stands, magazines et secondairement les émissions tv/radio mais à plus petite portée). +La communication hors ligne, principalement via affiches, bus, merchandising, stands, et magazines, ainsi que secondairement via émissions TV/radio, atteindra surtout les enfants. ```
	Improve consistency in participant naming conventions. ___ Consider using a consistent naming convention for all participants. For example, use full names for all or just first names for all to maintain consistency and professionalism in the document. [PVs/WeeklyPVs/PV Weekly 27.03.2024.md [3-4]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-e4510ed678b3397a018a4ecc4d21e151a5ef881976eb74bc00e45e51200ecf22R3-R4) ```diff Présences: Nicolas, Patrick, Marine, Laura, Cassandre, Caroline, Myriam, Karen, Joris -À distance: Miguel, Rossiny, Cassandre, Vincent +À distance: Miguel, Rossiny, Vincent ```
	Add interactive elements to the storytelling to enhance engagement. ___ To enhance the narrative and maintain engagement, consider adding more interactive elements or visual aids within the storytelling sections. [Parcours/Storytelling/Storytelling - Cadre général.md [14]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-4280c66ea8d52c7c59a482a14a872ac3a35a2d0a3847c66606a5d4cc30fd153bR14-R14) ```diff -Les familles affrontent des situations loufoques causées par les sorts de Brumus, comme des lampadaires qui dansent, des bancs qui racontent des blagues ou encore des fontaines qui crachent du chocolat chaud. +Les familles affrontent des situations loufoques causées par les sorts de Brumus, comme des lampadaires qui dansent, des bancs qui racontent des blagues ou encore des fontaines qui crachent du chocolat chaud. Chaque situation pourrait inclure une petite illustration ou un QR code menant à une animation représentant l'effet magique. ```
	Add a conclusion to reinforce the story's moral. ___ Consider adding a summary or conclusion section at the end of the storytelling to reinforce the moral or lesson of the story, providing a clear takeaway for the readers. [Parcours/Storytelling/Storytelling - Cadre général.md [18]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-4280c66ea8d52c7c59a482a14a872ac3a35a2d0a3847c66606a5d4cc30fd153bR18-R18) ```diff -Brumus, reconnaissant envers les familles et conscient de ses erreurs, promet de travailler dur pour maîtriser sa magie et devenir, un jour peut-être, un sorcier aussi compétent que la professeure Violette. +Brumus, reconnaissant envers les familles et conscient de ses erreurs, promet de travailler dur pour maîtriser sa magie et devenir, un jour peut-être, un sorcier aussi compétent que la professeure Violette. En conclusion, cette aventure montre l'importance de la persévérance et de l'apprentissage continu. ```
	Correct a spelling mistake in the French word for "toad". ___ Consider revising the spelling of "crapeau" to "crapaud" to correct the typo in the French word for "toad". [Parcours/ville/Postes.md [21]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-60f6d9cb66d33a6257679d61aebf75a9bf6f579c0d02841bd561b3a83627ee7fR21-R21) ```diff -Chat - aigle - crapeau - vache +Chat - aigle - crapaud - vache ```
	Improve the naturalness of a French expression. ___ Replace "je me suis d’un coup senti très triste" with "je me suis soudain senti très triste" for a more natural expression in French. [Parcours/ville/Postes.md [59]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-60f6d9cb66d33a6257679d61aebf75a9bf6f579c0d02841bd561b3a83627ee7fR59-R59) ```diff -Picatso : No hélas je n’ai aucune idée de qui pourrait voler la pierre par contre ce matin en allant au Parc du Castrum je me suis d’un coup senti très triste que j’en ai même perdu mon inspiration. +Picatso : No hélas je n’ai aucune idée de qui pourrait voler la pierre par contre ce matin en allant au Parc du Castrum je me suis soudain senti très triste que j’en ai même perdu mon inspiration. ```
Bug	Correct grammatical error to match verb with plural subject. ___ Correct the grammatical error by changing "utilise" to "utilisent" to match the plural subject "Les campagnes". [Marketing/Guide pour la communication.md [19]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-5c98f0ecc5cc04345fa1b88340af7441369b28ac8af08259d292f091165e5b5aR19-R19) ```diff -RS : Les campagnes sur Instagram et Facebook utilise un vocabulaire positif exprimant les bénéfices pour les parents et les enfants des balades dans le monde de Violette et Brumus. +RS : Les campagnes sur Instagram et Facebook utilisent un vocabulaire positif exprimant les bénéfices pour les parents et les enfants des balades dans le monde de Violette et Brumus. ```
	Remove duplicate names from the attendance list. ___ Remove duplicate mention of "Cassandre" in the "À distance" list to avoid confusion and ensure accurate representation of attendance. [PVs/WeeklyPVs/PV Weekly 27.03.2024.md [4]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-e4510ed678b3397a018a4ecc4d21e151a5ef881976eb74bc00e45e51200ecf22R4-R4) ```diff -À distance: Miguel, Rossiny, Cassandre, Vincent +À distance: Miguel, Rossiny, Vincent ```
	Fix a grammatical gender agreement error in French. ___ Replace "verte" with "vert" to correct the gender agreement error in French, as "écran" is masculine. [Parcours/ville/Postes.md [39]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-60f6d9cb66d33a6257679d61aebf75a9bf6f579c0d02841bd561b3a83627ee7fR39-R39) ```diff -L’écran devient verte/vibre/valide la direction cela le prochain dialogue de Piou-piou. +L’écran devient vert/vibre/valide la direction cela le prochain dialogue de Piou-piou. ```
	Correct a plural agreement error in French. ___ Replace "toute les cases" with "toutes les cases" to correct the plural agreement in French. [Parcours/ville/Postes.md [87]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-60f6d9cb66d33a6257679d61aebf75a9bf6f579c0d02841bd561b3a83627ee7fR87-R87) ```diff -Puzzle coulissant en bois de 4x4 avec un emplacement vide. Toute les cases sont de la même couleur sauf un qui est rouge. +Puzzle coulissant en bois de 4x4 avec un emplacement vide. Toutes les cases sont de la même couleur sauf une qui est rouge. ```
	Correct a plural form error in French. ___ Replace "je vais avoir besoin de votre aide... enfin c’est plutôt lui qui va en avoir besoins" with "je vais avoir besoin de votre aide... enfin c’est plutôt lui qui va en avoir besoin" to correct the plural form error in French. [Parcours/ville/Postes.md [4]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-60f6d9cb66d33a6257679d61aebf75a9bf6f579c0d02841bd561b3a83627ee7fR4-R4) ```diff -Professeur Violette la castorette apparait : Bonjour les amis je vais avoir besoin de votre aide... enfin c’est plutôt lui qui va en avoir besoins. +Professeur Violette la castorette apparait : Bonjour les amis je vais avoir besoin de votre aide... enfin c’est plutôt lui qui va en avoir besoin. ```
Maintainability	Use bullet points for clarity and consistency in listing items. ___ To enhance readability and maintain a consistent format, consider using bullet points for the list of lexical fields. [Marketing/Guide pour la communication.md [13]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-5c98f0ecc5cc04345fa1b88340af7441369b28ac8af08259d292f091165e5b5aR13-R13) ```diff -Champs lexical : aventure, parcours, balade, promenade, amis, Violette, Brumus, ensemble, aide /entraide, énigme, sort, sortilège. +Champs lexical : +- aventure +- parcours +- balade +- promenade +- amis +- Violette +- Brumus +- ensemble +- aide / entraide +- énigme +- sort +- sortilège ```
Readability	Enhance readability by breaking down long paragraphs into bullet points. ___ Consider breaking down the long paragraph into bullet points or smaller paragraphs to enhance readability and clarity. [PVs/WeeklyPVs/PV Weekly 27.03.2024.md [7]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-e4510ed678b3397a018a4ecc4d21e151a5ef881976eb74bc00e45e51200ecf22R7-R7) ```diff -Joris Retour sur le meeting de ce matin. Il s'est fait défoncer... On a pas la bonne perspective sur le projet. Mais le travail fait est pertinent! Il faut qu'on fasse attention, le cahier des charges donné n'est pas le cahier des charges final. Ils s'attendent à ce qu'on questionne tout et qu'on le redéfinisse nous même. +- Joris: Retour sur le meeting de ce matin. Il s'est fait défoncer... +- Perspective: On n'a pas la bonne perspective sur le projet. +- Cahier des charges: Le travail fait est pertinent, mais le cahier des charges donné n'est pas final. Ils s'attendent à ce qu'on questionne tout et qu'on le redéfinisse nous-même. ```

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⏱️ Estimated effort to review [1-5]	5, due to the extensive and diverse changes across multiple files, involving both code and documentation. The PR includes modifications in project management, marketing strategies, user interaction designs, and implementation of new features in an application. This requires a detailed review of both the technical implementations and the conceptual alignment with the project's goals.
🧪 Relevant tests	No
🔍 Possible issues	Possible Bug: The mutation observer in `.obsidian/plugins/image-captions/main.js` might cause performance issues if not properly disconnected or if it triggers too frequently.
🔍 Possible issues	Content Clarity: Some of the newly added documents, such as `b2b/Lettre d'intention.md`, might require clearer definitions of terms and expectations to avoid future misunderstandings with business partners.
🔒 Security concerns	No

relevant file	.obsidian/plugins/image-captions/main.js
suggestion	Consider debouncing or throttling the mutation observer's callback to enhance performance, especially if the DOM changes frequently. This can prevent excessive computations and potential UI lag. [important]
relevant line	this.observer.observe(document.body, { subtree: true, childList: true });

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Best practice	Use `const` for variable declarations to ensure block scoping and avoid scope-related issues. ___ Consider using `const` instead of `var` for defining functions and variables to ensure they are block-scoped, which helps in preventing accidental global variable declarations and other scope-related bugs. [.obsidian/plugins/image-captions/main.js [6-12]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-7385594ef6952c8e0560e825db64a94d9e7b1dce3a744c42d19f2d4c78b5ddf6R6-R12) ```diff -var __defProp = Object.defineProperty; -var __getOwnPropDesc = Object.getOwnPropertyDescriptor; -var __getOwnPropNames = Object.getOwnPropertyNames; -var __hasOwnProp = Object.prototype.hasOwnProperty; -var __export = (target, all) => { - for (var name in all) +const __defProp = Object.defineProperty; +const __getOwnPropDesc = Object.getOwnPropertyDescriptor; +const __getOwnPropNames = Object.getOwnPropertyNames; +const __hasOwnProp = Object.prototype.hasOwnProperty; +const __export = (target, all) => { + for (const name in all) __defProp(target, name, { get: all[name], enumerable: true }); }; ```
Best practice	Use `let` in loops to ensure the loop variable is block-scoped. ___ Replace the use of `var` with `let` in loops to avoid potential issues with variable hoisting and ensure that the loop variable is block-scoped. [.obsidian/plugins/image-captions/main.js [10-12]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-7385594ef6952c8e0560e825db64a94d9e7b1dce3a744c42d19f2d4c78b5ddf6R10-R12) ```diff -for (var name in all) +for (let name in all) __defProp(target, name, { get: all[name], enumerable: true }); ```
Enhancement	Use template literals for string concatenation to enhance code readability. ___ Use template literals for string concatenation to improve readability and maintainability of the code. [.obsidian/plugins/image-captions/main.js [96]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-7385594ef6952c8e0560e825db64a94d9e7b1dce3a744c42d19f2d4c78b5ddf6R96-R96) ```diff -return "[[" + linktext + "]]"; +return `[[${linktext}]]`; ```
	Convert `NodeList` to an array using `Array.from` for better method compatibility. ___ Use `Array.from` to convert `NodeList` to an array for better compatibility with array methods and improved code readability. [.obsidian/plugins/image-captions/main.js [126]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-7385594ef6952c8e0560e825db64a94d9e7b1dce3a744c42d19f2d4c78b5ddf6R126-R126) ```diff -return child.childNodes; +return Array.from(child.childNodes); ```
	Use `for...of` loop with `async/await` for better control over asynchronous operations. ___ Consider using `async/await` consistently in asynchronous functions for better readability and error handling. [.obsidian/plugins/image-captions/main.js [102-106]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-7385594ef6952c8e0560e825db64a94d9e7b1dce3a744c42d19f2d4c78b5ddf6R102-R106) ```diff -el.findAll("img:not(.emoji)").forEach(async (img) => { +for (const img of el.findAll("img:not(.emoji)")) { const captionText = getCaptionText(img); const parent = img.parentElement; if (parent && (parent == null ? void 0 : parent.nodeName) !== "FIGURE" && captionText && captionText !== img.getAttribute("src")) { await insertFigureWithCaption(img, parent, captionText, ctx.sourcePath, plugin); } -}); +} ```
	Improve sentence clarity and conciseness. ___ Consider revising the sentence structure for clarity and conciseness. The current phrasing is somewhat redundant and could be streamlined for better readability. [Marketing/Guide pour la communication.md [7]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-5c98f0ecc5cc04345fa1b88340af7441369b28ac8af08259d292f091165e5b5aR7-R7) ```diff -Nous souhaitons parler avec un ton encourageant et enthousiaste en laissant libre choix à l’enfant. +Nous adoptons un ton encourageant et enthousiaste, laissant le choix libre à l’enfant. ```
	Enhance description for clearer communication strategy. ___ Consider using more specific language to enhance the description of the interaction between the mascots and the children. [Marketing/Guide pour la communication.md [42]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-5c98f0ecc5cc04345fa1b88340af7441369b28ac8af08259d292f091165e5b5aR42-R42) ```diff -Techniquement : Violette et Brumus en intéraction, bulles de textes simples et en “tu”. +Techniquement : Violette et Brumus interagissent directement avec les enfants à travers des bulles de texte simples et personnalisées. ```
	Improve text flow and reduce redundancy. ___ To avoid redundancy and improve the flow of the text, consider merging these two sentences into one. [Marketing/Guide pour la communication.md [36]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-5c98f0ecc5cc04345fa1b88340af7441369b28ac8af08259d292f091165e5b5aR36-R36) ```diff -C’est la communication hors ligne qui va atteindre les enfants principalement (affiches, bus, merch, stands, magazines et secondairement les émissions tv/radio mais à plus petite portée). +La communication hors ligne, principalement via affiches, bus, merchandising, stands, et magazines, ainsi que secondairement via émissions TV/radio, atteindra surtout les enfants. ```
	Improve consistency in participant naming conventions. ___ Consider using a consistent naming convention for all participants. For example, use full names for all or just first names for all to maintain consistency and professionalism in the document. [PVs/WeeklyPVs/PV Weekly 27.03.2024.md [3-4]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-e4510ed678b3397a018a4ecc4d21e151a5ef881976eb74bc00e45e51200ecf22R3-R4) ```diff Présences: Nicolas, Patrick, Marine, Laura, Cassandre, Caroline, Myriam, Karen, Joris -À distance: Miguel, Rossiny, Cassandre, Vincent +À distance: Miguel, Rossiny, Vincent ```
	Add interactive elements to the storytelling to enhance engagement. ___ To enhance the narrative and maintain engagement, consider adding more interactive elements or visual aids within the storytelling sections. [Parcours/Storytelling/Storytelling - Cadre général.md [14]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-4280c66ea8d52c7c59a482a14a872ac3a35a2d0a3847c66606a5d4cc30fd153bR14-R14) ```diff -Les familles affrontent des situations loufoques causées par les sorts de Brumus, comme des lampadaires qui dansent, des bancs qui racontent des blagues ou encore des fontaines qui crachent du chocolat chaud. +Les familles affrontent des situations loufoques causées par les sorts de Brumus, comme des lampadaires qui dansent, des bancs qui racontent des blagues ou encore des fontaines qui crachent du chocolat chaud. Chaque situation pourrait inclure une petite illustration ou un QR code menant à une animation représentant l'effet magique. ```
	Add a conclusion to reinforce the story's moral. ___ Consider adding a summary or conclusion section at the end of the storytelling to reinforce the moral or lesson of the story, providing a clear takeaway for the readers. [Parcours/Storytelling/Storytelling - Cadre général.md [18]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-4280c66ea8d52c7c59a482a14a872ac3a35a2d0a3847c66606a5d4cc30fd153bR18-R18) ```diff -Brumus, reconnaissant envers les familles et conscient de ses erreurs, promet de travailler dur pour maîtriser sa magie et devenir, un jour peut-être, un sorcier aussi compétent que la professeure Violette. +Brumus, reconnaissant envers les familles et conscient de ses erreurs, promet de travailler dur pour maîtriser sa magie et devenir, un jour peut-être, un sorcier aussi compétent que la professeure Violette. En conclusion, cette aventure montre l'importance de la persévérance et de l'apprentissage continu. ```
	Correct a spelling mistake in the French word for "toad". ___ Consider revising the spelling of "crapeau" to "crapaud" to correct the typo in the French word for "toad". [Parcours/ville/Postes.md [21]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-60f6d9cb66d33a6257679d61aebf75a9bf6f579c0d02841bd561b3a83627ee7fR21-R21) ```diff -Chat - aigle - crapeau - vache +Chat - aigle - crapaud - vache ```
	Improve the naturalness of a French expression. ___ Replace "je me suis d’un coup senti très triste" with "je me suis soudain senti très triste" for a more natural expression in French. [Parcours/ville/Postes.md [59]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-60f6d9cb66d33a6257679d61aebf75a9bf6f579c0d02841bd561b3a83627ee7fR59-R59) ```diff -Picatso : No hélas je n’ai aucune idée de qui pourrait voler la pierre par contre ce matin en allant au Parc du Castrum je me suis d’un coup senti très triste que j’en ai même perdu mon inspiration. +Picatso : No hélas je n’ai aucune idée de qui pourrait voler la pierre par contre ce matin en allant au Parc du Castrum je me suis soudain senti très triste que j’en ai même perdu mon inspiration. ```
Bug	Correct grammatical error to match verb with plural subject. ___ Correct the grammatical error by changing "utilise" to "utilisent" to match the plural subject "Les campagnes". [Marketing/Guide pour la communication.md [19]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-5c98f0ecc5cc04345fa1b88340af7441369b28ac8af08259d292f091165e5b5aR19-R19) ```diff -RS : Les campagnes sur Instagram et Facebook utilise un vocabulaire positif exprimant les bénéfices pour les parents et les enfants des balades dans le monde de Violette et Brumus. +RS : Les campagnes sur Instagram et Facebook utilisent un vocabulaire positif exprimant les bénéfices pour les parents et les enfants des balades dans le monde de Violette et Brumus. ```
	Remove duplicate names from the attendance list. ___ Remove duplicate mention of "Cassandre" in the "À distance" list to avoid confusion and ensure accurate representation of attendance. [PVs/WeeklyPVs/PV Weekly 27.03.2024.md [4]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-e4510ed678b3397a018a4ecc4d21e151a5ef881976eb74bc00e45e51200ecf22R4-R4) ```diff -À distance: Miguel, Rossiny, Cassandre, Vincent +À distance: Miguel, Rossiny, Vincent ```
	Fix a grammatical gender agreement error in French. ___ Replace "verte" with "vert" to correct the gender agreement error in French, as "écran" is masculine. [Parcours/ville/Postes.md [39]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-60f6d9cb66d33a6257679d61aebf75a9bf6f579c0d02841bd561b3a83627ee7fR39-R39) ```diff -L’écran devient verte/vibre/valide la direction cela le prochain dialogue de Piou-piou. +L’écran devient vert/vibre/valide la direction cela le prochain dialogue de Piou-piou. ```
	Correct a plural agreement error in French. ___ Replace "toute les cases" with "toutes les cases" to correct the plural agreement in French. [Parcours/ville/Postes.md [87]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-60f6d9cb66d33a6257679d61aebf75a9bf6f579c0d02841bd561b3a83627ee7fR87-R87) ```diff -Puzzle coulissant en bois de 4x4 avec un emplacement vide. Toute les cases sont de la même couleur sauf un qui est rouge. +Puzzle coulissant en bois de 4x4 avec un emplacement vide. Toutes les cases sont de la même couleur sauf une qui est rouge. ```
	Correct a plural form error in French. ___ Replace "je vais avoir besoin de votre aide... enfin c’est plutôt lui qui va en avoir besoins" with "je vais avoir besoin de votre aide... enfin c’est plutôt lui qui va en avoir besoin" to correct the plural form error in French. [Parcours/ville/Postes.md [4]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-60f6d9cb66d33a6257679d61aebf75a9bf6f579c0d02841bd561b3a83627ee7fR4-R4) ```diff -Professeur Violette la castorette apparait : Bonjour les amis je vais avoir besoin de votre aide... enfin c’est plutôt lui qui va en avoir besoins. +Professeur Violette la castorette apparait : Bonjour les amis je vais avoir besoin de votre aide... enfin c’est plutôt lui qui va en avoir besoin. ```
Maintainability	Use bullet points for clarity and consistency in listing items. ___ To enhance readability and maintain a consistent format, consider using bullet points for the list of lexical fields. [Marketing/Guide pour la communication.md [13]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-5c98f0ecc5cc04345fa1b88340af7441369b28ac8af08259d292f091165e5b5aR13-R13) ```diff -Champs lexical : aventure, parcours, balade, promenade, amis, Violette, Brumus, ensemble, aide /entraide, énigme, sort, sortilège. +Champs lexical : +- aventure +- parcours +- balade +- promenade +- amis +- Violette +- Brumus +- ensemble +- aide / entraide +- énigme +- sort +- sortilège ```
Readability	Enhance readability by breaking down long paragraphs into bullet points. ___ Consider breaking down the long paragraph into bullet points or smaller paragraphs to enhance readability and clarity. [PVs/WeeklyPVs/PV Weekly 27.03.2024.md [7]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/160/files#diff-e4510ed678b3397a018a4ecc4d21e151a5ef881976eb74bc00e45e51200ecf22R7-R7) ```diff -Joris Retour sur le meeting de ce matin. Il s'est fait défoncer... On a pas la bonne perspective sur le projet. Mais le travail fait est pertinent! Il faut qu'on fasse attention, le cahier des charges donné n'est pas le cahier des charges final. Ils s'attendent à ce qu'on questionne tout et qu'on le redéfinisse nous même. +- Joris: Retour sur le meeting de ce matin. Il s'est fait défoncer... +- Perspective: On n'a pas la bonne perspective sur le projet. +- Cahier des charges: Le travail fait est pertinent, mais le cahier des charges donné n'est pas final. Ils s'attendent à ce qu'on questionne tout et qu'on le redéfinisse nous-même. ```

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