Closed Lmntrix31 closed 5 months ago
PR Description updated to latest commit (https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/commit/1a14a07d53b1b82014b66f4fd84e4e1d9a259082)
⏱️ Estimated effort to review [1-5] | 2, because the PR primarily involves documentation updates and enhancements which are straightforward to review. The changes are well-documented and structured, making it easier to understand the context and intent of the updates. |
🧪 Relevant tests | No |
🔍 Possible issues | No |
🔒 Security concerns | No |
relevant file | Parcours/Panneaux parcours.md |
suggestion | Consider using consistent naming conventions for image files to improve maintainability and readability. For example, instead of having different naming styles like 'panneau final demo.png', 'panneau avec indice final demo.png', and 'petit panneau final demo video.png', standardize the naming convention across all files. [important] |
relevant line | ![[panneau final demo.png]] |
relevant file | Parcours/Panneaux parcours.md |
suggestion | It might be beneficial to add a brief description or caption under each image to enhance understanding and accessibility. This can provide context to the readers about what the image represents, especially for educational materials. [important] |
relevant line | ![[panneau final demo.png]] |
relevant file | ui-ux/annexes/Test utilisateurs.md |
suggestion | To enhance clarity, consider using a more structured format for the time durations added to tasks. For instance, consistently use minutes as a unit and specify ranges clearly, such as "1-2 minutes" instead of "1 min". This helps in setting clearer expectations for the test durations. [important] |
relevant line | Temps : 1 min |
relevant file | ui-ux/annexes/Test utilisateurs.md |
suggestion | For the newly added section on user test improvements, consider using bullet points for each task improvement to enhance readability and structure. This will help in quickly identifying each proposed change and make the document easier to follow. [medium] |
relevant line | ### Améliorations des tests users |
Category | Suggestions |
Enhancement |
Standardize the format of time estimates to improve clarity.___ **Consider specifying a range for the estimated time in a consistent format to avoidambiguity. For example, use a hyphen to separate the minimum and maximum time estimates.** [ui-ux/annexes/Test utilisateurs.md [73]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/161/files#diff-dff5a58cf638cb41de6d3cabb33d10f9e065a6202369535d0222b0b49a3af376R73-R73) ```diff -Temps : 3-5 min +Temps : 3-5 minutes ``` |
Improve the clarity and professionalism of the document.___ **To enhance the clarity and professionalism of the document, consider revising the phrasingand grammar of the improvement points to be more formal and precise.** [ui-ux/annexes/Test utilisateurs.md [124]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/161/files#diff-dff5a58cf638cb41de6d3cabb33d10f9e065a6202369535d0222b0b49a3af376R124-R124) ```diff -Voici les points d’améliorations pertinents que nous ferons : +Here are the relevant improvement points we will implement: ``` | |
Maintainability |
Use consistent task naming conventions.___ **It's beneficial to use a consistent naming convention for tasks to enhance readability andmaintainability of the document. Consider using a uniform format for task numbering.** [ui-ux/annexes/Test utilisateurs.md [128]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/161/files#diff-dff5a58cf638cb41de6d3cabb33d10f9e065a6202369535d0222b0b49a3af376R128-R128) ```diff -Tâche 0 : Faire la différence entre exploration et navigation et en faire deux tâches à part entière avec pour chacune des objectifs différents. +Task 0: Differentiate between exploration and navigation, making them two separate tasks with distinct objectives. ``` |
Clarity |
Use precise language to describe tasks and objectives.___ **To ensure clarity and prevent misunderstandings, consider using more precise language whendescribing the tasks and their objectives.** [ui-ux/annexes/Test utilisateurs.md [136]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/161/files#diff-dff5a58cf638cb41de6d3cabb33d10f9e065a6202369535d0222b0b49a3af376R136-R136) ```diff -Tâche 4 : Nouvelle tâche qui serait liée à ce qui s’est passé dans la tâche 1, et qui lui demanderait d’aller chercher l’objet gagné lors de sa balade. +Task 4: New task related to the events of Task 1, requiring the user to retrieve the item obtained during their walk. ``` |
Readability |
Add subheadings for each task to improve document structure and readability.___ **To improve the document's structure and readability, consider adding subheadings for eachtask improvement point to clearly delineate sections.** [ui-ux/annexes/Test utilisateurs.md [128]](https://github.com/C-Super/appY-Documentation/pull/161/files#diff-dff5a58cf638cb41de6d3cabb33d10f9e065a6202369535d0222b0b49a3af376R128-R128) ```diff -Tâche 0 : Faire la différence entre exploration et navigation et en faire deux tâches à part entière avec pour chacune des objectifs différents. +### Task 0 +Differentiate between exploration and navigation, making them two separate tasks with distinct objectives. ``` |
User description
ajout des panneaux
Type
documentation, enhancement
Description
Changes walkthrough
Panneaux parcours.md
Add Documentation for Interactive Educational Panels
Parcours/Panneaux parcours.md
physical panels with QR codes for an interactive educational
adventure.
such as PVC, wood, canvas, and metal.
suitability for outdoor or specific aesthetic purposes.
Test utilisateurs.md
Enhance User Testing Documentation with Specific Improvements
ui-ux/annexes/Test utilisateurs.md
expectations.
changes to tasks and methodologies to enhance user interface component
testing.