Editorial Comments 9 Jan 24 (CCitC Guidance dated 2 Jan 24)

[ecbconnor]

1. p4, para 2, replace Protection Profiles" by "Protection Profiles (PPs)" - first use
2. p5, SaaS Example para 1, replace "Cloud Service Provider" by "Cloud Service Provider (CSP)"
3. p6, PaaS Example, para below figure, replace "Cloud Service Provider" by "CSP"
4. p7, IaaS Example, para below figure, replace "Cloud Service Provider" by "CSP"
5. p7, IaaS Example, para below figure, what is the significance of the asterisk at end of para?
6. p8, first line, replace "Cloud Service Provider" by "CSP"
7. p9, para 1, last line, replace "Cloud Service Provider" by "CSP"
8. p9, para 6, replace "HSM" by "Hardware Security Module (HSM)". Note this is the only use of Hardware Security Module in the document so may not need the initialization.
9. p10, para 3, replace "ST" by "Security Target (ST)"; replace "TSS" by "TOE Summary Specification (TSS)"; replace "SFR" by "Security Functional Requirement (SFR)"
10. p13, para 2, line 1, replace "to provide" by "providing"
11. p14, para 2, line 3, replace "on-prem" by "On-premise (on-prem)"
12. p14, para 3, line 1, replace "It may the case" by "It may be the case"
13. p15, para 1, line 1, replace "Target of Evaluation (TOE)" by "TOE" - previously spelled out on p4
14. p26, 1st bullet, line 1, replace 'TSF' by 'TOE Security Function (TSF)' - first use
15. p26, 3rd bullet, line 3, replace "TLS" by "Transport Layer Security (TLS)" - first use
16. p25, para 2, line 4, replace "FedRAMP" by "Federal Risk and Authorization Management Program (FedRAMP)" - first use
17. Throughout document replace "PP's" by "PPs" - 15 occurences. Currently 22 occurences of "PPs"

[bharveyTX]

All changes implemented.