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About Us Review Suggestions #104

Open michaelportereiko opened 4 years ago

michaelportereiko commented 4 years ago

https://www.chaliceuu.org/about-us/ The page does not include the UU Principles and sources and does not include information specifically about Chalice Yoast Readability suggestions: Flesch Reading Ease: The copy scores 48.6 in the test, which is considered difficult to read. Try to make shorter sentences, using less difficult words to improve readability.

Passive voice: 27.3% of the sentences contain passive voice, which is more than the recommended maximum of 10%. Try to use their active counterparts.

Consecutive sentences: The text contains 3 consecutive sentences starting with the same word. Try to mix things up!

Sentence length: 36.4% of the sentences contain more than 20 words, which is more than the recommended maximum of 25%. Try to shorten the sentences.

Improvements (1) Transition words: Only 27.3% of the sentences contain transition words, which is not enough. Use more of them.

GrumpyOldTroll commented 4 years ago

Note UUA page-by-page guidance for this page: https://www.uua.org/communications/websites/wordpress-theme/documentation/pages/about/about-us

GrumpyOldTroll commented 4 years ago

Deferred setting up keywords until the content is reviewed.