Closed CaptainSifff closed 1 month ago
@michelemartone thanks for providing the initial draft. I have slightly reworded it and made one suggestion.
I think this section makes an important point and I am pleased to see it included. I have suggested some polishes to language but nothing to materially change the points being made.
Thanks, I have integrated all your suggestions. Much better now.
I think this section makes an important point and I am pleased to see it included. I have suggested some polishes to language but nothing to materially change the points being made.
Thanks! My feeling is, they make the text more concise.
make it a PR.