5.1.2 extra word or colloquial

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5.1.2 extra word or colloquial #158

Open DifferentComputers opened 1 month ago

DifferentComputers commented 1 month ago

"As in a sequence between a single PC and an opponent, each per pair of..."

"per pair"? This is maybe an example of colloquial English, but I think the word "per" just doesn't belong there.

jlaufersweiler commented 4 weeks ago

I left this out of my recent typo fix PR. It could maybe use a touch, but it's not obviously wrong either. I leave it to @iancooper 's judgement.

iancooper commented 4 weeks ago

When we get the core book out, soon, I think we will need to do a lot of PRs to update text here to fix issues (language over game rules) that text resolves. I am focused on a large proofreading document right now. I might want crowd source some help with getting this SRD updated once the book is out

jlaufersweiler commented 4 weeks ago

Sounds good. #162 would clear out a lot of these existing typo & issues, if you have time to merge it.