Closed davidchambers closed 8 years ago
Here are my suggested tweaks to your draft, @yokolet. Let me know your thoughts. I'm happy to revert any changes which don't seem to you like improvements.
I'd appreciate a review from you as well, @kpfell, as you certainly have a way with words.
Thanks @davidchambers ! Also, I'm looking at @kpfell :heart:
Here are my suggested tweaks to your draft, @yokolet. Let me know your thoughts. I'm happy to revert any changes which don't seem to you like improvements.
I'd appreciate a review from you as well, @kpfell, as you certainly have a way with words.