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CloudOpting / cloudopting-manager

The cloudopting core manager
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ENGLISH has to be revised. #304

Open xeviscc opened 8 years ago

xeviscc commented 8 years ago

All ENGLISH files has to be revised. Check files at: https://github.com/CloudOpting/cloudopting-manager/tree/master/rest-component/src/main/webapp/i18n/en

xeviscc commented 8 years ago

Also images have to be revised: slide 1 image slide 2 img_slide2 slide 3 img_slide3

xeviscc commented 8 years ago

Grammar Platform Check done by Stephen Mirkovic.

_Slide 1: _ Cloud Opting -> CloudOpting is an European marketplace -> is a European marketplace to cover its business needs -> for its business needs

Slide 2: The Cloud Opting -> CloudOpting Fulfilling the Cloud Opting requirements > After fulfilling the CloudOpting requirements Services Catalogue -> Service Catalogue (x2) After a simple purchasing method -> After following a simple purchasing method

Slide 3: Better control of resources for the business monitoring the application
New business opportunities for SME’s through the reusable open data or The reusable open data provides new business opportunities to SMEs Wider promotion at a European level thanks to a diverse network A reduction in the Total Cost of Ownership through shared infrastructure(?) costs or Costs shared between members, driving down the Total Cost of Ownership Automation of application deployment through Docker (is docker commander the name of the tool)? Access to a wide catalogue of ready-to-use and customisable applications