Closed lpgoldstein closed 5 months ago
All our previous blog titles are sentence case. I think it will look more uniform on the homepage if you made the title sentence case.
Might be good to link PRA site (https://pra.digital.gov/) here.
I'm also a little unsure about the term "doing good by" in relation to PRA. Since it is a law, maybe change this to be "To be in compliance with Paperwork Reduction Act requirements, ..."
I would also find somewhere to link this, maybe embed if you add the the 'to be in compliance" language : https://github.com/DOI-ONRR/research/wiki/Doing-design-and-research-in-the-federal-government#paperwork-reduction-act-pra.
Can you add a citation (link to the authoritative source) here? Also I think "institutional review board" might be a proper noun (refs: https://www.fda.gov/about-fda/center-drug-evaluation-and-research-cder/institutional-review-boards-irbs-and-protection-human-subjects-clinical-trials; https://www.gao.gov/products/gao-23-104721)
Again, citation here
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@eelzi-ONRR I'm not sure what to link to for IRB since each institution has their own. I've incorporated Christine's other comments.
Ok here's the last of my review:
There are sections of paragraphs where a sentence is just a long list of what the user needs to do. I wonder if this should be broken out in numbered list form to emphasize how much effort the user has to go through. Like this:
The user must:
- download,
- open,
- read and comprehend on their own,
- add their electronic signature,
- reattach to the email, and
- send it back to us.
@lpgoldstein we shouldn't link to anything for IRB. It's too complicated - there's no single IRB site except a confusing login page
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