Closed meiqimichelle closed 8 years ago
Great news! tagging myself @avarnum
@avarnum DeSoto is ready for your review here: https://federalist.18f.gov/preview/18F/doi-extractives-data/desoto-update/case-studies/desoto/
@avarnum All text and footnotes are ready for your proofreading pleasure! Just hit those "PREVIEW" links above to see each case study.
Images are still separate, but we could use your eyes on a few questions over in #1603 👀
Hi @coreycaitlin @meiqimichelle i'll do my best to review some of these today. I'll follow up on #1603 first and if I don't get to these, @splatts will review and provide feedback in time for next week's OAG call on Friday.
Okay! All images are implemented (except Elko & Eureka employment, which I seem to have misplaced, as I mentioned in #1603). Remaining steps:
Final-final-final review and implementation of any further edits from Deloitte:
Miscellaneous other things:
Here's the full list of changes for the first three (which you can also see highlighted here):
Thanks @coreycaitlin ! A few updates that weren't noted in there:
St. Louis - I think you got this previously, but we need to make sure the Iron Ore Production graph says St. Louis and not Minnesota. We explain this in the contextual.
De Soto - 1) Note the updated graph for Louisiana Natural Gas Production. I think the migration of the graph caused an extra "Natural" to be in there before Louisiana (but can't tell if that's just a glitch on my screen because it's not in my source doc?). 2) Note the update to the labeling of the Sales & Use graph: we need to specify that these are Fiscal Years by adding "(FY)" in the title.
@coreycaitlin and by "updates that weren't noted in there" - I mean in your above updates :) We noted these in the docs, but marked them in red or track changes since they were graphs and we couldn't highlight.
Thanks, @splatts — @ericronne caught both of those when he created the images a few weeks ago.
@ericronne Moving this here — could you send over the chart for Elko/Eureka employment?
FYI on the graph from Tarrant and Johnson Counties from #1603 (which is now closed) - the reason it looks different from last year's is because we are using an updated data source which is different from last year's. Last year we used Censtat, and this year we are using BLS. When calling Censtat this winter to inquire about data availability to update the chart, they told us BLS data should be used as it was more current and accurate. Hence, the notable difference. We clarified this further in the data availability charts.
A number of the marked chart updates indicated typos, title changes, or legend fixes that we'd already caught. As far as I can tell, here are the charts that need updating because the data has changed noticeably:
Miscellaneous additional things to update:
Also, as an FYI to Team Deloitte — many of the Quarterly Census links go to a blank search page, so I updated the formatting of those footnotes to include instructions for finding the reference so users can duplicate results, rather than pretending to link to the filtered view (which results in a broken-feeling user experience).
Hi @coreycaitlin . Thanks for filtering the charts. Please send us the preview links when they're ready and we'll review the cases before they go live. In terms of your advice on Kern County, we agree that we should not introduce a new graphic style. Let's stick with the stacked bar charts and include the percentages in the chart itself like we do with Boone and many others. You have this data from the line chart in the existing format. Please let us know if you need any help with that data.
@coreycaitlin thanks for clarifying on the Quarterly Census links and for re-formatting them so it's a more pleasant (and accurate) user experience. Good for us to know these links go dead as we think about this process next year (and years forward). And we're dealing with the same thing on footnote 34 for North Slope - looks like they just updated that particular source as of July 27th as well with a new year of data. @avarnum is going to call them today to get the source for the 2014 data we are citing since we can't find it on their site now that the data was updated.
Hi @coreycaitlin @meiqimichelle , as discussed on today's standup, I'm including the first batch of minor catches for the county case studies. Please let me know if you have trouble finding the reference or have any questions. See below:
Kern County: The oil production graph needs to be updated based on the latest version the IA sent.
Greenlee County: In the first paragraph, the number cited should be "9.7 billion"
More to come.
@coreycaitlin I spoke to folks in Alaska for the citation that was broken in the North Slope Case Study and they have resolved the issue. The footnote you mentioned should function now--I just tested it.
@avarnum Thanks! Can you take one more look at Kern County (https://federalist.18f.gov/preview/18F/doi-extractives-data/dev/case-studies/kern/)? PR #1717 hopefully fixed that one.
@coreycaitlin PR #1717 looks like it does the trick! thanks
@coreycaitlin
A few minor catches for Tarrant and Johnson Counties:
@coreycaitlin A few catches for Pima County:
Let's change the last sentence in "Employment" to "…from 2004 through 2014." to match the graph below which runs from 2005 to 2014
Let's say in the 2nd paragraph of Pima County Revenue, "state does not disclose what percentage of the $19.9 million distributed to all cities…" to match the number above ($19.9 million) which was updated based on more recent data. It currently reads "$19 million"
Updates to Humboldt and Lander:
The production graph needs to be updated with the new one from the Word documents sent by the IA. It still has an old version missing some data.
Updates to Elko & Eureka
The production graph needs to be updated with the new one from the Word documents sent by the IA. It still has an old version missing some data.
@avarnum Hi Andrew! For those charts — if they aren't listed above, it means I couldn't spot the differences in the charts. Could you write up a clear description of what changed (perhaps with a table of what data the charts should be showing) for these two charts?
Okay! @avarnum and I chatted, compared the charts, and it looks like all is well with those two charts.
I'll get on fixing Pima County now!
Okay! I think we're about ready to close this out — @avarnum, have you had a chance to look these all over?
Okay, not quite done — we finally have 2013 data for both NV production charts. @ericronne is creating new images for those two charts.
@coreycaitlin fixed link ^^
A few folks raised concerns about this AML chart, and wondered if another design might communicate more effectively....
Here's an alt design, which is hopefully more clear...
This design leverages some of the approaches already in use on the site, such as the multiple line charts employed in "megacharts" on state pages. It's also simpler in terms of color (dark blue always refers to funds from collected fees, and light blue to interest-earnings funds).
Feedback coveted, per usual! :)
Moving the AML work over to #1682 .
Here are the remaining edits, as I understand them:
@avarnum, @splatts: if there are any other changes we should make based on feedback from the online advisory group, please list them in a comment here!
Hi @coreycaitlin I think this list looks good. However, I think we need to wait on the second point ("remove the phrase that says how many fewer mines are in Boone, Logan, and Mingo counties") until after the September Co-Chairs meeting. That was one that the Online Advisory Group felt needed to be resolved at Co-Chairs.
@avarnum My understanding from the online advisory group was that that we should make that change -- it was one that we introduced to clarify, but we were happy to change it back to the wording approved previously. I believe it was something else (perhaps the entire paragraph re-writes based on new data?) that needed to go back to the Co-Chairs. @usEITI do you remember on this point?
Hi @meiqimichelle . You are right. Please return that phrase to what was approved previously.
We have edits and additional info to add to the county case studies for this year. The original Word docs are here . This work is started on the
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Charts For design review and proofing in #1603 . This list is for implemetation (getting 'em on the page)