search

DOI-ONRR / doi-extractives-data

Information on the extractive industries in the U.S. from federal data.
https://revenuedata.doi.gov/
Other
77 stars 41 forks source link

new blog #5015

Closed lpgoldstein closed 4 years ago

lpgoldstein commented 4 years ago

Fixes #<5012>

:sunglasses: PREVIEW Changes proposed in this pull request: -Adds new blog post

jennmalcolm commented 4 years ago

There's an extra paragraph in the middle of a sentence. Also, do you think the revenuedata.doi.gov should be a link? image

jennmalcolm commented 4 years ago

need a space after the blog post link image

jennmalcolm commented 4 years ago

Add a comma before the first and, or maybe break it into two sentence because that sentence iw quite long. image

jennmalcolm commented 4 years ago

probably should use whole name, haven't introduced NRRD acronym image

jennmalcolm commented 4 years ago

You use ONRR acronym later so should include it in parenthesis here. image

jennmalcolm commented 4 years ago

another extra paragraph break image

jennmalcolm commented 4 years ago

need another comma before this and image

jennmalcolm commented 4 years ago

need comma and "to" image

jennmalcolm commented 4 years ago

add comma after that image

jennmalcolm commented 4 years ago

I think this should be on-the-job image

jennmalcolm commented 4 years ago

Change is to was, and add comma before "and". image

jennmalcolm commented 4 years ago

Looks good besides those minor changes. Sorry I didn't notice some of these in the Google Doc.

Maroyafaied commented 4 years ago

This period should be removed image