[cPP PUBLIC REVIEW]

[JDavid-Thompson]

What is the location of the document where the comment is made? Section 2.2, End of third paragraph.

Comment Type. S = Substantial: a comment or issue significant enough to warrant a possible objection if the change (or a similar objective) is not met.

What is the comment? Please describe. The statement about SoC makes it sound like the TOEs must be SoCs, not just that they could be.

Describe the proposed solution/edit Suggest deleting “are integrated into a System on Chip (SoC) and as such”.

[woodbe]

Change the whole paragraph to something like this below (wordsmith the bullets)

Some examples of a DSC could be:

• A DSC may be comprised of a single embedded component within a device, such as a Secure Enclave Processor (SEP) or an SoC,
• a multi-component system comprised of a software layer and several hardware components (which may be discrete or embedded), such as a Trusted Execution Environment (TEE).
• Other configurations are possible, with the key point being the DSC is embedded within a larger system and is not a discrete component.

These dedicated hardware/software components are isolated components of a larger physical package. <> below shows a block diagram of a typical example of a DSC TOE with all of its internal components.