chrisn
commented
2 years ago Another issue I just found:
9.2.6 Metadata samples carrying the same event instances
The second paragraph says: "... carry additional ids to detect duplicated ISO/IEC 23001-18 spanning multiple samples". Should this be something like: "... carry additional ids to detect duplicates spanning multiple samples"?
irajs
Here are some very minor editorial issues I noticed when reading through the draft for community review: https://dashif.org/docs/DASH-IF-IOPv5.0-Part10-DRAFT-V0.95.pdf
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Page 6: Introduction
Both Part 8 and Part 10 are labelled as "this document"
Page 7: Scope
timed sensitive -> time sensitive
Page 11: 6.2.1 Dispatch mode selection
the to -> to the
Page 14: 7.2.4 Event timing considerations
before Period start time -> before the Period start time
Page 14: 7.2.5 Announcement and removal of Events in the MPD
minimum in-advance offset insert -> minimum in-advance offset to insert (?)
Page 16: 9.2.1 Dispatch mode selection
on at the -> at the
Page 16: 9.2.5 MPD signaling
Exampl -> Example
Also, Example 9-1 uses a mixture of straight and curly quotes
Page 17: 9.2.6 Metadata samples carrying the same event instances
Exampl -> Example
Also, Example 9-2 uses a mixture of straight and curly quotes
Page 18: Support of DASH events
In Table 10-1: "Refenrece" -> "Reference"
Page 18: 11.1 SCTE 214
urn: scte:scte35:2013:bin -> urn:scte:scte35:2013:bin
Page 19: 11.4 HbbTV
an scheme -> a scheme
I also noted that the draft says "map the DASH event to HTML DataCue’s TextTrack". DataCue isn't defined in the current WHATWG HTML specification, instead in W3C HTML5. There is currently no standard DataCue API that has support across multiple browser engines.
Page 19: 11.5 ATSC 3.0
dispatch model -> dispatch mode