Editorial Notes

[technogeek00]

Collection of minor editorial notes from a read through:

• Missing secondary square brackets to enable linking to MPEGCMAF
  • https://github.com/Dash-Industry-Forum/Guidelines-TimingModel/blame/master/01-Intro.inc.md#L75
• Strange wording "This means that segments of the presentation get available over time"
  • possibly better as "This means that segments of the presentation are available over time"
  • https://github.com/Dash-Industry-Forum/Guidelines-TimingModel/blame/master/21-Timing.inc.md#L24
• Strange wording "...same content to adopt to the network bandwidth fluctuation."
  • Possibly better as "...same content to adapt to the network bandwidth fluctuation."
  • https://github.com/Dash-Industry-Forum/Guidelines-TimingModel/blame/master/21-Timing.inc.md#L30
• Missing negation word: "Clients must calculate the total duration of a static MPD by adding up the durations of each period and must rely on the presence of MPD@mediaPresentationDuration."
  • Should be "Clients must calculate the total duration of a static MPD by adding up the durations of each period and must not rely on the presence of MPD@mediaPresentationDuration."
  • https://github.com/Dash-Industry-Forum/Guidelines-TimingModel/blame/master/21-Timing.inc.md#L90
• Missing Pluralization: "A representation is a sequence of segment as defined by..."
  • Should be "A representation is a sequence of segments as defined by...."
  • https://github.com/Dash-Industry-Forum/Guidelines-TimingModel/blame/master/21-Timing.inc.md#L96
• Nested list not nested when defining unnecessary segment reference exceptions for dynamic MPD
  • https://github.com/Dash-Industry-Forum/Guidelines-TimingModel/blame/master/21-Timing.inc.md#L145
• Missing secondary square brackets to enable linking to MPEGDASH
  • https://github.com/Dash-Industry-Forum/Guidelines-TimingModel/blame/master/21-Timing.inc.md#L368
• Missing secondary bracket start to enable linking to MPEGDASH
  • https://github.com/Dash-Industry-Forum/Guidelines-TimingModel/blame/master/21-Timing.inc.md#L499
• Nested list not nested when defining MPD refresh logic
  • https://github.com/Dash-Industry-Forum/Guidelines-TimingModel/blame/master/21-Timing.inc.md#L572
• Period connectivity descriptor link broken
  • https://github.com/Dash-Industry-Forum/Guidelines-TimingModel/blame/master/21-Timing.inc.md#L691
• tkhd box reference broken
  • https://github.com/Dash-Industry-Forum/Guidelines-TimingModel/blame/master/22-Addressing.inc.md#L55