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Suggestions for latest updates from DataONE - upcoming training #99

Closed olendorf closed 4 years ago

olendorf commented 4 years ago

change reach a broad community to reach a broader community
make two sentences ... broad community, and we are looking forward... -> ...broad community. We are looking forward...

aebudden commented 4 years ago

Thx. First change made, retained a single sentence for the second (the opening to the para felt stunted with 3 short sentences) but made a different sentence change to help with flow.