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On self sovereign human identity.
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Staying loyal to either-or structure #117

Closed medied closed 7 years ago

medied commented 7 years ago

Sort of nitpicking here with this part:

If a user disagrees with someone's comment, a ''downvote'' can either retrieve a ''VOTE'' from the commenter back to the user if there was a previous delegation. If no delegation relation exists among them, then a ''downvote'' will act as a penalty sending a ''VOTE'' from the commenter back to the funds of the organization implementing the Sovereign instance.

I think it's more readable if we keep the 'either-or' structure. Thought about doing something like "can either a) retrieve... ; or b) if no delegation...", but wasn't sold on that.

So I just added an 'or' (if though it's between two sentences 🤔). Suggestion in this PR below:

If a user disagrees with someone's comment, a ''downvote'' can either retrieve a ''VOTE'' from the commenter back to the user if there was a previous delegation. Or if no delegation relation exists among them, then a ''downvote'' will act as a penalty sending a ''VOTE'' from the commenter back to the funds of the organization implementing the Sovereign instance.