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R2/3: Sentence-level corrections #156

Closed jalanmiddleton closed 8 years ago

jalanmiddleton commented 8 years ago

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  • Sometimes, closing quotation marks are used as opening ones.
  • Avoid single lines at the beginning/ending of a page
  • Introduction: “in Hermans’ [9] and Jansen’s [10]” - both papers have more than one author
  • Section II: “ofter” -> “often”
  • Section III.A: I do not understand why the goals are numbered “1”, “!1”, etc.
  • Section IV.B: “Hermans, Aivaloglou, and Jansen” - reference missing, three authors -> “et al.”?

Section II:

  • into complex formula --> into complex formulae
  • ofter --> often Section III:
  • will to foster --> is meant to foster
  • times to root --> times the root
  • some use as ABS --> some uses as ABS (or even better rephrase the sentence) Section IV:
  • we can be gained --> what can be gained
  • the one can --> one can
  • lest it return --> lest it returns REFERENCES
  • in some of the references: euses --> EUSES
  • in [25]: java --> Java
  • in [25]: eclipse ide --> Eclipse IDE
  • in [26]: api --> API
jalanmiddleton commented 8 years ago

Fix all.