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R3: Reduce discussion of limitations #158

Closed jalanmiddleton closed 8 years ago

jalanmiddleton commented 8 years ago

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The authors spend more than a page discussing limitations of the user study as well as of the overall approach. While discussing limitations is an important part of empirical research papers, I would have preferred to see more examples of insights about the Enron dataset gained with the tool.

jalanmiddleton commented 8 years ago

Don't call section 6 "limitations." Reduce each individual section to a paragraph?

CaptainEmerson commented 8 years ago

Correct me if I'm wrong: The reviewer is under the impression that this is a "study limitations" section, when it's really a "visualization limitations" section.

Clarify. Yes, a section heading will help, but clearer writing will help too, especially at the front of the section and each paragraph. Like: "The study revealed several limitations of the viz. One limitation of hte viz was... Another limitation of the viz was..."