Closed hollykennedy closed 1 year ago
@FullTang you wanna take a peek?
Pushing this to make sure the style changes aren't objectionable to the author -- I made some pretty substantial changes to hopefully improve readability. It's so dense with good info!
That is, I only did a few paragraphs, just down to the section "## Hash Extraction Techniques," in case these edits aren't sitting right with @FullTang
@hollykennedy I like your style! It looks like my writing style is a bit wordy and you have figured out a way to condense what I was trying to say while keeping the key elements and getting the message across. I noticed a couple of typos and a small issue where it would not be technically accurate based on the way you rewrote it, but overall I like the changes! Feel free to dive into the rest of the chapter, if you so choose.
Thank you!
Great collaboration, both! Cheers! @hollykennedy let me know if you want this merged now, or we can keep it open while you finish up and review from there. I'm cool with whatever.
Oh, and Gov Crack has rebranded itself or been discontinued altogether, so we can remove that suggestion from this chapter.
Great collaboration, both! Cheers! @hollykennedy let me know if you want this merged now, or we can keep it open while you finish up and review from there. I'm cool with whatever.
Let's leave it open until I'm done, thanks! Working on being a bit more careful so I don't break the content itself while I edit.
I will close this for now. We can reopen anytime, if needed
Pushing this to make sure the style changes aren't objectionable to the author -- I made some pretty substantial changes to hopefully improve readability. It's so dense with good info!