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Dijajana / english-for-designers

I am Diana, illustrator, graphic designer and mediocre ukulele player based in Kutná Hora.
https://dijajana.github.io/english-for-designers/
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Alt text edits #1

Open Dijajana opened 3 years ago

Dijajana commented 3 years ago

Alt Text Edits

  1. Cutely photoshopped photo of uppercase D made out of assorted jewels.

  2. Trinkets and simple watch forming Capital D. Warmly photoshopped with leaves and other brushes.

  3. Assorted jewelry forms the letter D with faded red and green filters and brush strokes.

  4. Photo of Capital D made out of assorted bijouterie with faded red and green filters and brush strokes.

  5. Photoshopped photo of assorted bijouterie which forms uppercase D.

  6. Photo of scattered bijouterie forming uppercase D with faded red and green filters and brush strokes.

  7. Scattered trinkets on a clear background, forming uppercase D, with warm faded filters and brush strokes.

  8. Cute flowery photo of scattered trinkets forming uppercase D with faded red and green filters and brush strokes.

  9. Cute flowery photo of scattered trinkets forming uppercase D with faded red and green filters.

  10. Cutely photoshopped photo of scattered trinkets forming uppercase D.

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  1. Scattered trinkets on a clear background, forming uppercase D, with warm faded filters and brush strokes.

  2. Cute flowery photo of scattered trinkets forming uppercase D with warm faded red and green filters.

  3. Cutely photoshopped photo of scattered trinkets forming uppercase D.

jgagne commented 3 years ago

I like the direction:

Scattered trinkets on a clear background, forming uppercase D, with warm faded filters and brush strokes.

I'm not sold on cute, but my initial reaction was the work had a very soft, dream-like, and ephemeral quality. I like the addition of "warm fade filters and brush strokes", but maybe seeing the colors would add that warmth too.

Consider this edit:

A dreamy uppercase letter D, formed by scattered trinkets set on a faded wash of warm pinks and purples.

I used "layer" in place of "wash," but "layer" seemed too engineer sounding, you know. I want dreaminess.