Dr-Eberle-Zentrum / Data-projects-with-R-and-GitHub

https://dr-eberle-zentrum.github.io/Data-projects-with-R-and-GitHub/
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Feedback for Yue #284

Open yuguang003 opened 1 week ago

yuguang003 commented 1 week ago

Hi @Yue-Z9, I think your projekt is very interesting and meaningful. Your dataset contains a large amount of data, which allows a extremely accurate average calculations, providing a precise refection of New York's weather condition. And your description is also very precise, but i think it's better that to provide more explanation about your data manipulation. For example which columns will be uesd for your projekt, and a bit explanation about these columns, in order to let others know what they are about. Moreover, i still have a question about the visualization. In your chart, what needs to be calculate is the average value of different pollutants, i saw different pollutants was measured by different measure Info, will you standard it in to one? Or you have some more clever way? Btw: I can not open your picture. In summary, your projekt is very expressive. And i hope you can do it better.