Open pierreleripoll opened 1 year ago
General question: when we open the website, would it be possible to land on the story map?
[x] Before slide 1: Possible to add a title page? cf. the 1st slide of the initial ppt.
[x] Slide 1 Nouakchott, Mauritania: French: “ depuis le milieu des années 1950 ET couvre » French and English: superscript for km2 and m3 for the units
[x] Slide 2 Flooding issues: French: « DEPUIS 2010, une augmentation de la fréquence des inondations a été observée ET certaines parties de la ville sont inondées en permanence » English: « SINCE 2010, an increasing frequency of flooding events has been observed, while a portion of the city has remained flooded.» “and therefore reduced infiltration around the city.” + the period is missing at the end of all sentences.
[x] Slide 3 Hydrogeological context: Please check the complementary powerpoint presentation, I updated the slide
[x] Slide 4 [no title]: Could we add a title to this slide, similarly to all the other slides? It could be "Impact of the flooding" "Impact des inondations" French: Réseau d’eaux uséeS limité Croissance urbaine et rÉduction RisqueS épidémiologiqueS English: all good
[x] Slide 5 Project Description and Goals: Please refer to the complementary powerpoint presentation for the new layout and the text corrections
[x] Slide 6 Project objectives: French: « MODELISATION ECO-HYDROGéOLOGIQUE » as the title of the box (instead of "Modélisation hydrogéologique – dynamique végétale") English: in the plant physiology section: “soil-plant-atmosphere” (remove space before atmosphere) « ECO-HYDROGEOLOGY MODELLING » as the title of the box (instead of "Hydrogeologic-plant dynamic Modelling"
[x] Slide 7 Première campagne de mesures: French: « La première campagne de mesures » (pas de -s à la fin de mesure) in the title and text English: all good
[x] Slide 8 Groundwater monitoring: Is it possible to keep the map that was included in the original powerpoint presentation instead of the zoomable map imbeded on the story map?
[x] Slide 9 Transpiration monitoring: Please update the figures of the slide with the one form the supplementary powerpoint presentation. Can the reference to ICT international stays under the bottom left figure?
[x] Slide 10 Targeted tree species: Please update the picture for Casuarina equisetifolia and Phoenix dactylifera by the ones in the complementary presentation and add the vernacular names: Azadirachta indica (Quinin/Nim) Casuarina equisetifolia (Filao) Eucalyptus camaldulensis (Eucalyptus) Phoenix dactylifera EN = (Date palm/Nkhal) FR = (Palmier-datier/Nkhal) Tamarix aphylla (Ttarve)
[x] Slide 11 References: Please add the reference for Burgess et al. (2001) Burgess, S. S. O., Adams, M. A., Turner, N. C., Beverly, C. R., Ong, C. K., Khan, A. A. H., & Bleby, T. M. (2001). An improved heat pulse method to measure low and reverse rates of sap flow in woody plants†. Tree Physiology, 21(9), 589–598. https://doi.org/10.1093/treephys/21.9.589
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[x] Is it possible to switch the slide 9 Transpiration Monitoring with the slide 10 Targeted tree species, in order to have first the targeted tree species and then the transpiration monitoring?
[x] In the initial powerpoint presentation for the story map, there were 4 extra slides between the current slide "Targeted tree species" and "References". Would it be possible to include them in the story map? I included an updated version in the supplementary presentation with pictures to make it more friendly (Link to the interactive map; project partners; project team, acknowledgements)
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Specification for the Story Map App: