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Manuscript and new analysis files for Vinod et al., 2022, New Phytologist
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merge/ rearrange first two paragraphs of leaf traits section #102

Closed teixeirak closed 2 years ago

teixeirak commented 2 years ago

@NidhiVinod , I feel like the first 2 paragraphs of the leaf traits section have substantial overlap and should be rearranged into 1-2 new paragraphs. I don't want to tackle that now, though, as I don't feel that I understand some aspects enough.

For example, you talk about ontogeny in both paragraphs, and it would make sense to combine that content, but I'm not familiar with that literature.

teixeirak commented 2 years ago

I took a stab at this. @NidhiVinod , please review carefully.

NidhiVinod commented 2 years ago

@teixeirak, I read through the paragraph and it looks great!

teixeirak commented 2 years ago

Great!