[강유현] - 2021년 2월 8일 [자기소개]

[kanguhyeon]

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My name is Yoohyeon. I am a student. My hobby is watching movies. My favorite food is fried chicken. I'm interested in stocks these days. I work out hard these days. Because I only stay at home these days. So, I am not healthy. I like playing computer games with my friends. But my family doesn't play games.

And I would like to introduce my family. My sister is in college. She likes to draw. My mom likes to cook. My mom is good at cooking. She is kind. My father's hobby is reading books. And he also likes to play golf. My family is harmonious. I love my family. My family likes to watch movies. So, we usually watch movies at home.

And I would like to introduce my favorite drama. There are so many TV shows that I like. So I would like to introduce only two. My first favorite drama is Kingdom. Kingdom is a zombie drama. It is so fun. My second favorite drama is Stranger Things. Stranger Things is superpower and monster drama. It is very interesting. My favorite movie is the Avengers series. It is very interesting.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'My father's hobby is reading books. He likes to play golf.' -> 'My father's hobby is reading books. And he also likes to play golf.'

2. 'First, my favorite drama is Kingdom.' -> ' My first favorite TV show is Kingdom.'

3. 'Second, my favorite drama is Stranger Things.' -> 'My second favorite TV show is Stranger Things.'