shawn-hy1232
commented
3 years ago Okay! Very Good! I like it.
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'I went to glasses shop' -> 'I went to a store to get a glasses.'
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'I usually watch dramas' -> 'I usually watch some TV shows on Netflix.'
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'Because I ate less lunch, so I was very hungry.' -> There are two sentence and two conjunctions.
- 'Because I didn't eat much at lunch, I was very hungry.'
kanguhyeon
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
Today, I woke up late. I ate breakfast as soon as I woke up. After I finished eating breakfast, I went to a store to get a glasses. Because my glasses are old. After I arrived at home, I ate lunch. After I finished eating lunch, I rested. I usually watch some TV shows on Netflix when I rest at home. So, I watched a drama. It was fun to watch the drama. I studied English with my tutor. After I finished studying English, I wanted to eat dinner. Because I didn't eat much at lunch, I was very hungry.