shawn-hy1232
commented
3 years ago Good!
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'It was very fun to watch a comedy show.' -> What should be changed here?
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'cube' -> 'Rubik's cube'
Open kanguhyeon opened 3 years ago
shawn-hy1232
commented
3 years ago Good!
'It was very fun to watch a comedy show.' -> What should be changed here?
'cube' -> 'Rubik's cube'
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Today, I woke up late. Because I watched a comedy show all night. It was very fun to watch the comedy show. After I woke up, I ate breakfast. After I finished eating breakfast, I watched a Rubik's cube practice video on YouTube. Because I practice Rubik's cube these days. A year ago, I was good at Rubik's cube. But I forgot how to do Rubik's cube. After I finished watching the video, I ate lunch.