shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'So I order friend chickens from BBQ a lot.' -> 'So I order fried chicken from BBQ a lot.'
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'I usually do pull up and jump rope .' -> 'I usually do pull ups and jump rope.'
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'I study c language, JAVA.' -> 'I study C and JAVA.'
What is your favorite topic in math?
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
My name is Yoohyeon. I am a high school student. I like playing computer games and watching movies. I usually play computer games with my friends and I watch movies on Netflix in my free time. My favorite food is fried chicken. I like BBQ. So I order fried chicken from BBQ a lot. Nowadays, I spend most of my time at home because of COVID-19. So I started to work out at home. I usually do pull ups and jump rope. I started studying coding recently. I study C and JAVA. It's hard but it's also fun. I want to be a programmer in the future. I like puppies. But I am allergic to puppies. So, I can't have a puppy. My favorite subject is math. Because I am good at math. But I hate Korean.
And I would like to introduce my family. My sister is in college. She likes to draw. My mom likes to cook. My mom is good at cooking. She is kind. My father's hobby is reading books. And he also likes to play golf. My family is harmonious. I love my family. My family likes to watch movies. So, we usually watch movies at home.
And I would like to introduce my favorite drama. There are so many TV shows that I like. So I would like to introduce only two. My first favorite drama is Kingdom. Kingdom is a zombie drama. It is so fun. My second favorite drama is Stranger Things. Stranger Things is superpower and monster drama. It is very interesting. My favorite movie is the Avengers series. It is very interesting.