[조소영] - 2021년 3월3 일

[Josoh]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 2PM. Then I ate curry for lunch. Curry is one of my favorite food. I like spicy food. After I ate lunch, I went to a study cafe and registered for 4 weeks. I took a gap year and I want to spend my time me more efficiently. But when I am in home, I get lazy so I will study at a study cafe. At 4:30pm I went to work. I had to go a bookstore to buy some thankyou cards but I forgot. I worked from 5:00 to 10. I only had two boiled eggs for dinner. So I was super hungry when I got (came) home. There were chilli shrimps on the table and I ate them.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'Curry is one of my favorite dishes.' -> 'Curry is one of my favorite food.'

2. 'I like spicy taste.' -> 'I like spicy food.'

3. 'I want to spent my time meaningfully.' -> 'I want to spend my time more efficiently.'

4. 'But when I am in home, I become lazy' -> 'But when I am at home, I get lazy.'

5. 'I had to go a bookstore to buy some letter papers but I forgot.' -> 'I had to go to a bookstore to buy some thank you cards, but I forgot.'

6. 'My dinner were two eggs so I was hungry when I came to home.' -> 'I only had two boiled eggs for dinner. So I was super hungry when I got (came) home.'