[강민지] - 2021년 3월 10일

[minjikang00]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I thought running is the most simple exercise. It seemed like the only thing I need is just my body. But it was not true. I had to buy some stuffs like running shoes, track suits and gloves, and so on. My friend told me that running is the most boring exercise in the world. it's hard to make it a habit. So we have to buy new clothes for running regularly to keep going. ​ Actually I am a starter, so I don't need expensive stuffs. But these days I started browse some items in Nike online shop. And now I want to buy even a Apple watch. Today I didn't running but do buy a T-shirts. What am I doing now..

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'So we have to buy new clothes for running regularly to keep going.' -> ??

2. 'Actually I am a starter,' -> 'Actually, I am just starting,'

3. 'I started browse some items in Nike online shop.' -> 'I started to browse some items on Nike online store.'

4. 'And now I want to buy even a Apple watch.' -> 'And now I even want to buy an Apple Watch.'

5. 'Today I didn't running but do buy a T-shirts.' -> 'Today, I didn't go for a run, but I bought a T-shirt.

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