shawn-hy1232
commented
3 years ago Good!
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'Jesty Salun' -> 'Zesty Saloon'
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'It sells shrimp-와사비 burger.' -> 'They have shrimp-wasabi burger.'
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'so we waited at cafe' -> 'so we waited at a cafe'
Open Josoh opened 3 years ago
shawn-hy1232
commented
3 years ago Good!
'Jesty Salun' -> 'Zesty Saloon'
'It sells shrimp-와사비 burger.' -> 'They have shrimp-wasabi burger.'
'so we waited at cafe' -> 'so we waited at a cafe'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up late today. My parents and I went to a mall to buy my dad's jeans. But he didn't buy and my mom bought new dishes. Then I went to 성수 with my friends. We planned to go Zesty Saloon. It sells shrimp-wasabi burger. But when we got there, their waiting list was full. So we went to another Italian restaurant. There were 23 teams in front of us so we waited at a cafe, eating croffle. 성수 is really hot nowdays. Its vibe is similar to 연남동.