[조소영] - 2021년3 월 17일

[Josoh]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I went to Gangnam to go to a hospital. There is my favorite tea cafe "Macchiatea" in Gangnam. I stopped by there before I went to the hospital. I ordered black macchiatea. It was really good as usual. Then, I went to the hospital, drinking the tea. I got several tests. My eyesight was 1.2. Sometimes, my left eye feels weird. And I told the doctor my symptoms. She said it is because my eyes are too dry. I should drop artificial tears more often.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I went to Gangnam to go hospital.' -> 'I went to Gangnam to go to a hospital.'

2. 'I dropped by there before I went to the hospital.' -> 'I stopped by there before I went to the hospital.'

3. 'I asked about feeling irritation in my left eye to the doctor.' -> 'Sometimes, my left eye feels weird. And I told the doctor my symptoms.'

4. 'She answered it is because of dryness.' -> 'She said it's because my eyes are too dry.'