[강민지] - 2021년 3월 25일

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Yesterday I watched the movie [MINARI]. Honestly these days I'm not comfortable going to movie theater. But I definitely want to watch it in a theate. Because there are actors that I love and, of course, It is nominated for Oascar. ​ And you know, the movie was just awesome. I don't know a lot about Korean American people's lives especially in 80s. But I guess family problems are kind of universal, so I could empathize with every family members. I think, It's a power of directing. ​ They didn't use many songs in the movie. But they were really good. It's reminded me one of my favorite movie [Moonlight]. I think I have to watch it once again in a theater.

[shawn-hy1232]

What movie are you talking about?

1. 'going movie theater.' -> 'going to movie theaters.'

2. 'But I definitely wanted to watch it in the theater.' -> 'But I definitely want to watch it in a theater.'

3. 'It is nominated Oascar.' ->' it is nominated for Oscar.'

4. 'I don't know life in America as a Korean (especially 1980's)' -> 'I don't know a lot about Korean American people's lives especially in 80s.'

5. 'But the relationships problem of their family is kind a common thing,' -> 'But I guess family problems are kind of universal.'

6. 'There isn't many songs, but the tracks of the movie was amazing.' -> 'They didn't use many songs in the movie. But they were really good.'

7. 'I think I have to watch it once again in the theater.' -> 'I think I have to watch it once again in a theater.'