[오서원] - 2021년 3월 28일

[seowonoh]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

Today I hung out with my boyfriend all day. He gave me flowers. They were yellow roses and they were really beautiful. I really appreciated it. First, we went to 연남 for lunch. There is one restaurant we found yesterday, so we went there. When we arrived, there were a lot of people, so we had to wait for a while. We wrote down our names and walked around the neighborhood. As we were walking, we saw one macaron cafe. The macarons looked really good. So we bought two macarons and went back to the restaurant. While we were waiting for our turn, we ate macarons for apetizer. And we knew that we were not wrong. Macarons were really good. Finally, we entered the restaurant and I ran into my middle school friend. We were surprised and said "Hi" to each other. The foods were good but little bit salty. But we finished the dishes. We liked them a lot. After lunch, we got twon cups of coffee from a famous cafe and watched movie. And then we went to a cocktail bar. Because we had a lot of lunch, we skipped dinner. The bar had good food, good alcohol, and good staff. And I liked its vibe as well. It will probably be one of my favorite places. Today, everything was good. It was a really happy day. But from now on, I have to finish my assignment. I can do it... All is well...

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'Today my boyfriend and I planned to hang out all day.' -> 'Today, I hung out with my boyfriend all day.'

2. 'When I met him, he gave me flowers for present.' -> 'He gave me flowers.'

3. 'I really appreciated him.' -> Do you appreciate him or the fact that he gave you flowers?

4. 'There was a restaurant we found yesterday,' -> 'There is one restaurant we found yesterday,'

5. 'there was a lot of people so we had to wait for seat.' -> 'there were a lot of people, so we had to wait for a while.'

6. 'We wrote our name and wandered around.' -> 'We wrote down our names and walked around the neighborhood.'

7. 'When we were wandering, we saw a macaron cafe, which looked delicious.' -> 'As we were walking, we saw one macaron cafe. The macarons looked really good.'

8. 'We were surprised and greeted.' -> 'We were surprised and said 'Hi' to each other.'

9. 'Foods were good.' -> 'The foods were good'

10. 'But we ate deliciously' -> 'But we finished the dishes. We liked them a lot.'

11. 'we took out coffee in a famous cafe' -> 'we got two cups of coffee from a famous cafe'

12. 'The bar had good food, good alcohol, and good staff.' -> 'The bar had good food, good alcohol, and good staff. And I liked its vibe as well.'

13. 'It will probably become one of my favorite places.' -> 'It will probably be one of my favorite places.' What's the name of this bar?