shawn-hy1232
commented
3 years ago Good!
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'But I will have most difficult road drive test.' -> 'But the most difficult part of the test is waiting. It's the road driving test.'
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'I went to camping gear shop for my part-time job.' -> 'I went to work.'
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'I will go to the aquarium tomorrow' -> 'I am going to an aquarium tomorrow'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
Today was very long day. I woke up at 6am and I went to Sindorim for my driver's license test. Finally, I passed my test and I'm so happy now. But the most difficult part of the test is waiting. It's the road driving test. That's the last test. I want to finish the test well. I had a Samgak gimbap for lunch and I went to work. I worked for 8 hours and then I was so tired. I came back to my place and I took a shower. I am going to an aquarium tomorrow!!!!!!! Yeah!!!!!!!!!!