[Jane] - 2021년 3월 30일

[jane7215]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

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I went to Jamsil Lotte aquarium after my English class. Today, the weather was so good. I was in a good mood. The aquarium was very big. I saw a lot of sea animals. There was a white dolphin. She was very impressive. Actually, I felt sorry for the animals in the aquarium. Maybe, they want to be free. After that, I walked to 석촌호수 and I saw many cherry blossoms. It was so beautiful. Many people were there. And I had a Japanese food for dinner. Today was fun.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I went to Jamsil Lotte aquarium after I took an English class.' -> 'I went to Jamsil Lotte aquarium after my English class.'

2. 'Today weather was so good.' -> 'Today, the weather was so good.'

3. 'I was so happy from morning.' -> 'I was in a good mood.'

4. 'Aquarium was very large.' -> 'The aquarium was very big.'

5. 'I saw many fishes, frogs and otters.' -> 'I saw a lot of sea animals.'

6. 'A white dolphin was most impressive to me.' -> 'There was a white dolphin. She was very impressive.'

7. 'I felt sorry for fishes in aquarium.' -> 'I felt sorry for the animals in the aquarium.'

8. 'Maybe they want to free.' -> 'Maybe, they want to be free.'

9. 'Many people were in there.' -> 'Many people were there.'

10. 'And I had a Japanese food for dinner. Today was very good.' -> 'And I had Japanese food for dinner. Today was fun.'