[민지우] - 2021년 3월 31일

[jiwoo0205]

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I late for school today. I have to go to school at 8:20am. I usually leave home at 7:50am. But I left home at 8:00am today. I got into my classroom int the morning. But my teacher wasn't in the classroom at 8:20am. I decide to wake up 5 minutes early tomorrow. I brought cheese cake at home. So, I ate cheese cake for breakfast at school. And I ate lunch after I finished 3 classes. After my friends and I ate lunch, we took a walk around the school. And we watched cherry blossomes. The weather was good. we finished lunch time, we took classes until at 4pm. After the class, we were tired but happy, because tomorrow is Friday.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I late for school today.' -> 'I was late for school today.'

2. 'I have to go to school at 8:20am.' -> 'I have to be at school by 8:20am.'

3. 'I got into my classroom int the morning. But my teacher wasn't in the classroom at 8:20am.' -> 그래서 학교에 늦었다는거야 안늦었다는 거야? ㅎㅎ 8시 20분까지 교실에 간거면 학교에 늦지는 않은거네? 단지 집에서 늦게 출발했다는 뜻? -> 'I quickly rushed into the classroom. I thought I was late. But I wasn't. It was exactly 8:20AM. But my teacher wasn't there.'

4. 'I decide to wake up 5 minutes early tomorrow.' -> 'I am going to wake up 5 minutes early tomorrow.'

5. 'I brought cheese cake at home.' -> 'I brought a cheese cake from home.'

6. 'So, I ate cheese cake for breakfast at school.' -> 'So, I ate the cheese cake for breakfast at school.'

7. 'After my friends and I ate lunch,' -> 'After my friends and I finished lunch,'

8. 'And we watched cherry blossomes.' -> 'And we saw cherry blossoms.'

9. 'we finished lunch time, we took classes until at 4pm.' -> 'After the lunch break, we took classes until 4pm.'

Very good! This is exactly what I wanted!