[조소영] - 2021년4 월1 일

[Josoh]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

Today is April fools' day. There is this tradition in our school where kids wear their high school uniforms and take pictures. And when I was a freshman in college, my friends and I did that too! But I did nothing this year. My high school friend asked me if she could borrow my uniform. So I let her wear it. I didn't go to any of the April Fool's events. But I saw Instagram posts that my friends put up. They were really funny.'

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. ' When I was a freshman, I wore my high school uniform at the college. Almost everyone wore it and took photos. It is such a tradition for freshmans. ' -> 'There is this tradition in our school where kids wear their high school uniforms and take pictures.' -> 'And when I was a freshman in college, my friends and I did that too!'

2. 'My high school friend asked me to lend the uniform. So I borrow her.' -> 'My high school friend asked me if she could borrow my uniform. So I let her wear it.'

3. 'Eventhough I didn't join the event, today was funny. Many friends posted lies pn the instagram.' -> 'I didn't go to any of the April Fool's events. But I saw Instagram posts that my friends put up. They were really funny.'