[민지우] - 2021년 4월 2일

[jiwoo0205]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 7am. I was really tired in the morning. But I went to school. Today, the school finished early today. So I went home with my friends. We ordered 떡볶이. We often eat 떡볶이 at my house. After we ate 떡볶이, we watched Netflix. We spent about 10 minutes, trying to figure out what to watch on Netflix Anyway we watched 승리호. And we did 공기 in the living room. We had a great time today.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I really tired in the morning.' -> 'I was really tired in the morning.'

2. 'So I went to my home with my friends.' -> 'So I went home with my friends.'

3. 'We often eating 떡볶이 at my house.' -> 'We often eat 떡볶이 at my house.'

4. 'We picked Netflix for about 10 minutes.' -> 'We spent about 10 minutes, trying to figure out what to watch on Netflix.'