shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'And I ate Mcdnalds for breakfast with my family.' -> 'And I had McDonald's for breakfast with my family.'
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'I ate hamburger after a long time.' -> 'It has been a long time since the last time I had hamburger.'
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'And I finished Harry potter series 2.' -> 'And I finished watching Harry Potter series 2.'
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'But I think my best Movie or drama is Friends.' -> 'But I think my favorite show is Friends.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up at 12pm. I slept a lot today. So I was so happy after I woke up. And I had McDonald's for breakfast with my family. It was so good. It has been a long time since the last time I had hamburger. After I ate breakfast, I watched Harry potter. I started watching Harry potter 2 weeks ago. And I finished watching Harry potter series 2. But I think my favorite show is Friends. I'm still watching Friends nowadays.