[Jane] - 2021년 4월 4일

[jane7215]

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I got up at 10am. Every Sunday, I don't go anywhere. I just stay home. So I didn't go to work. I didn't go to Talk-Talk and Driver's License Academy today. I loooove Sunday. I watched YouTube on my phone. And I also cleaned my room while listening to music. And I went to Lotte Cinema at 3pm. I watched an animation named '조제 호랑이 그리고 물고기들'. It was so impressive. It was very touching. But my friend said it was very boring. After that, I went to a Mexican restaurant for dinner. The name of the restaurant is 'Verde' and it's in Yeonnam dong. It was already my fourth time going there. I love that place. I had a taco and two quesadillas. I came back home at 8pm. It was a good day.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'Every Sunday is not to go anywhere. So I don't go to work or TALKTALK or driver's license academy.' -> 'Every Sunday, I don't go anywhere. I just stay home. So I didn't go to work. I didn't go to Talk-Talk and Driver's License Academy today.'

2. 'I watched my phone, listened the music and cleaned my room.' -> 'I watched YouTube on my phone. And I also cleaned my room while listening to music.'

3. 'And I went to the Lotte cinema at 3 pm.' -> 'And I went to Lotte Cinema at 3pm.'

4. 'I felt a lot of emotion like happy, sad and poor.' -> 'It was very touching.'

5. 'But my friend said 'It was bored'.' -> 'But my friend said it was very boring.'

6. 'This restaurant name is 'Verde' and It is in Yeonnam.' -> 'The name of the restaurant is 'Verde' and it's in Yeonnam dong.'

7. 'I went there for fourth time and I love there.' -> 'It was already my fourth time going there. I love that place.'