shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'I was late 10 minutes.' -> 'I was 10 minutes late.'
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'While I took a pictures the sculptures, I knew that the sculpture got broken.' -> 'I was taking pictures of sculptures and I found that one of the sculptures was cracked.
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'I sticked it with a glue gun.' -> 'I tried to put them together with a glue gun.'
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'But there was a problem because a glue shim was smaller than the size of a glue gun.' -> 'But there was a problem with the glue gun. It wasn't working.'
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'I had a lunch. Time passed and I wanted 빨미까레 so much.' -> 'I had lunch. After a while, I was craving 빨미까레.'
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'I agonized whether eat or not.' -> 'I was debating whether I should eat it or not.'
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'eventually, I ate 빨미까레.' -> 'I ended up eating it.'
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'So, I applied J-1 visa program to the German American Chamber of Commerce California. I want to go safely in Los Angeles.' -> 'And I applied for J-1 visa program. I hope everything works out well. I want to go to LA so bad.'
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'I wrote my blog about a cafe Jamjam.' -> 'I wrote a post about cafe Jamjam on my blog.'
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'Writing on a blog is fun these days.' -> 'Writing a blog post is something I do for fun these days.' (Would you post the link here? I want to read it! lol)
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'I walked in the park with Jane.' -> 'Jane and I went to a park.'
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'I think that I don't drink Iced-Americano. I will get up at 8:50AM.' -> 'I don't think I had coffee today. I'm going to wake up at 8:50AM tomorrow.'
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일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up at 9AM. After I took a shower, I went to work by subway. I was 10 minutes late. I was taking pictures of sculptures and I found that one of the sculptures was cracked. I tried to put them together with a glue gun. But there was a problem with the glue gun. It wasn't working. I solved a problem and it took 30 minutes. I had lunch. After a while, I was craving 빨미까레. I was debating whether I should eat it or not. I ended up eating it. It tasted so good. I love it. And I applied for J-1 visa program. I hope everything works out well. I want to go to LA so bad. I wrote a post about cafe Jamjam on my blog. Writing a blog post is something I do for fun these days. After I came back home, Jane and I went to a park. I'm tired. I don't think I had coffee today. I'm going to wake up at 8:50AM tomorrow. Goodnight.