[Hailey] - 2021년 4월 7일

[euiji]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I got up at 9AM. After I took a shower, I went to work by subway. I was so tired. I didn't have enough sleep last night. I had an early lunch. I had pasta. It was not good. And I took a break. There weren't many customers today. So I was bored. I checked my schedule for the next month. My friend, Gyeongmin called me because she missed me. We talked on the phone for about an hour. We just talked about our daily lives. Gyeongmin is my friend from my hometown. I miss her and my hometown. And I had a snack for dinner. Jane told me to come to Hongdae Station exit number 8. So that we could go home together. So we came back home together. After I watched Youtube on the phone, I was ready to sleep. Before going to sleep, I studied English.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'Because I don't slept well at night.' -> 'I didn't have enough sleep last night.'

2. 'I early had a lunch for pasta.' -> 'I had an early lunch. I had pasta.'

3. 'It tasted not good.' -> 'It was not good.'

4. 'And I took to rest.' -> 'And I took a break.'

5. 'Today slacked and I was bored.' -> 'There weren't many customers today. So I was bored.'

6. 'I checked my schedule by May.' -> 'I checked my schedule for the next month.'

7. 'My friend, Gyeongmin called me because I missed.' -> ??

8. 'We talked on the phone about a everyday life for an hour.' -> 'We talked on the phone for about an hour. We just talked about our daily lives.'

9. ' I was wishful to go my hometown.' -> 'Gyeongmin is my friend from my hometown. I miss her and my hometown.'

10. ' Jane suggested If I quickly arrived to Eight times Exit of Hongdae, she waited for me.' -> 'Jane told me to come to Hongdae Station exit number 8. So that we could go home together.'

11. 'So, we came back home.' -> 'So we came back home together.'

12. 'Before I got to sleep, I studied English.' -> 'Before going to sleep, I studied English.'