[Hailey] - 2021년 4월 8일

[euiji]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I didn't go to work today. So I got up late. After getting out of bed, I took a shower. I went to see my dermatologist at 1:30PM. and I came back to Hapjeong Station. I had fish cake for lunch. Because I didn't have enough time to eat at a sit-down restaurant. I had an appointment at a waxing shop. It was my first time going to a waxing shop. It was interesting. And I went to Talk-Talk to study English. Today I learned about Infinitive and Gerund. I enjoy studying English. I want to be fluent in English. But it's not easy. I went to drink coffee with my friend, Nagyung. We just talked about our daily lives for about an hour. And I came back home. I talked on the phone for about an hour and half with another friend. I am grateful for my friends. Because they are always there for me. They empathize with what I go through and they also share their stories. I like having a small talk with my friends. I hope this friendship lasts forever. And I reviewed what I learned today. I am going to get up early tomorrow. And I'm going to go and study at Starbucks.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I went dermatology at 1:30PM.' -> 'I went to see my dermatologist at 1:30PM.'

2. 'And I came back Hapjeong Station.' -> 'and I came back to Hapjeong Station.'

3. 'I had a fish cake for lunch.' -> 'I had fish cake for lunch.'

4. 'Because I didn't have enough time.' -> 'Because I didn't have enough time to eat at a sit-down restaurant.'

5. 'I should went to waxing shop. It was my first time to went waxing shop.' -> 'I had an appointment at a waxing shop. It was my first time going to a waxing shop.'

6. 'And I went to study English at Talk-Talk.' -> 'And I went to Talk-Talk to study English.'

7. 'I learned infinitive and gerund.' -> 'Today I learned about Infinitive and Gerund.'

8. 'I hope to speak English very well but It was sometimes difficult.' -> 'I want to be fluent in English. But it's not easy.'

9. 'nagyung' -> 'Nagyung'

10. 'about an hour and a half with my other friend.' -> 'about an hour and half with another friend.'

11. 'I sometimes feel grateful to my friends.' -> 'I am grateful for my friends.'

12. 'Because they listened to my stories well, empathized with them, and talked their stories.' -> 'Because they are always there for me. They empathize with what I go through and they also share their stories.'

13. 'l like to have a chat with my friends.' -> 'I like having a small talk with my friends.'

14. 'I hope to go well them.' -> 'I hope this friendship lasts forever.'

15. 'And I reviewed learning today.' -> 'And I reviewed what I learned today.'

16. 'I decide to get up early. After getting up early, I plan to go to study at Starbucks.' -> 'I am going to get up early tomorrow. And I'm going to go and study at Starbucks.'