[Hailey] - 2021년 4월 10일

[euiji]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 8AM, but I got out of my bed at 11:30AM. I went to work by subway. I had 차돌강된장덮밥. It was salty. I had a chat with another staff. We went to a cafe to get something to drink. We also got 빨미까레. We sat in the cafe and talked for a while. I don't always have many customers everyday. I feel like I'm an information desk employee. So, I wrote a post about waxing shop on my blog. My friend came to see me for a while. We had a small talk. After he left, I got ready to get off work. I was so tired. My coworker told me that people have only fixed amount of energy for a day. So if I meet too many people in one day, then I eventually get tired. I somewhat agree with his opinion. After I took a shower, I watched some funny videos on Youtube. I was craving spaghetti aglio e olio. But I didn't eat. I am going to eat it tomorrow. So I look forward to eating it tomorrow. I'm going to wake up early.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I woke up at 8AM But I got out of bed at 11:30AM.' -> 'I woke up at 8AM, but I got out of my bed at 11:30AM.'

2. 'After he bought 2 cups of iced-Americano and 빨미까레 from a cafe, he gave one of iced-Americano to me.' -> 'We went to a cafe to get something to drink. We also got 빨미까레.'

3. 'I didn't have many customers everyday.' -> 'I don't always have many customers everyday.'

4. 'After he gone, I readied to come back home. While I came back home, I was tired.' -> 'After he left, I got ready to get off work. I was so tired.'

5. 'My coworker said people had a fixed energy to meet people for a day. I somewhat agree in his opinion.' -> 'My coworker told me that people have only fixed amount of energy for a day. So if I meet too many people in one day, then I eventually get tired. I somewhat agree with his opinion.'

6. 'I wanted to eat some food especially spaghetti aglio e olio (알리오올리오). I controlled my impulse and I decided to eat tomorrow.' -> 'I was craving spaghetti aglio e olio. But I didn't eat. I am going to eat it tomorrow.'

7. 'So, I look forward to come tomorrow.' -> 'So I look forward to eating it tomorrow.'