shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'So, I had lunch to staff restaurant.' -> 'I had lunch at the staff restaurant.'
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'I had a craving for something sweet like chocolate, doughnut, bread.' -> 'I was craving something sweet. I wanted to have some chocolate, doughnut or some sort of pastry.'
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'So, I ended up eating doughnut.' -> 'So, I ended up eating a doughnut.'
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'After eating once, I felt like eating more. I skipped dinner. I thought that After I took out donut, I came home. Then, I suddenly promised my friends that I will drink with them tonight. So, I didn't have donut. After I bought a soju, I came back home. We had a good time. My friend, Jeonghyeon came her home. After I took a shower, I fell asleep immediately.' -> 'After finishing one, I wanted to have some more doughnuts. So I decided to skip dinner and have some more at home. On my way back home, I bought some more doughnuts and came back home. Then I got a call from my friend and she asked me if I want to hand out. And I said yes. So I went out again to buy some soju. My friend, Jeonghyeon came to my place. We drank soju and had a good time. I ended up not eating my doughnuts. After Jeonghyeon left, I took a shower. And I fell asleep right after.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I got up at 9AM. I went to work by taxi. I regretted leaving home late. I had lunch at the staff restaurant. It tasted so so. I was craving something sweet. I wanted to have some chocolate, doughnut or some sort of pastry. So, I ended up eating a doughnut. This is so good. After finishing one, I wanted to have some more doughnuts. So I decided to skip dinner and have some more at home. On my way back home, I bought some more doughnuts and came back home. Then I got a call from my friend and she asked me if I want to hang out. And I said yes. So I went out again to buy some soju. My friend, Jeonghyeon came to my place. We drank soju and had a good time. I ended up not eating my doughnuts. After Jeonghyeon left, I took a shower. And I fell asleep right after.