[Ruby] - 2021년 4월 20일 Tue.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 6 am as usual.

The first thing I did after waking up was feeding my dog. The second thing was turning on the radio And I took a shower while I was listening to the news on the radio.

I went to work by subway as usual. On a subway train, I was on my phone checking out Github issues. And I missed a stop where I had to get off. I was supposed to transfer to another line from the stop I missed.

I arrived at the office at 8 am. In the morning, I had a meeting with my boss and senior staffs at a cafe.

After the meeting, I had 수제비 with my colleagues for lunch.

We came back to the office and we worked hard. I got off work with my junior staff at 4:30 pm. We went to 신도림 station at 5:30 pm. We only transferred once. We had 와규 for dinner We watched a musical, Chicago at 디큐브아트센터.

We turned in questionhaire for Covid -19 before the show. 최정원 and Tiffany Young were on the show. They were the main actors. Their costumes were very sexy. Musical was very fun.

I try to watch a show once a month. I had so much fun today.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'The first thing, I gave feed and water to my dog.' -> The first thing I did after waking up was feeding my dog.'

2. 'The second thing, I turned on the radio.' -> 'The second thing was turning on the radio.'

3. 'On my way to subway, I watched Github. Yikes, I passed trainfer station because I watching Github.' -> 'On a subway train, I was on my phone checking out Github issues. And I missed a stop where I had to get off. I was supposed to transfer to another line from the stop I missed.'

4. 'I had meeting with my boss and senior staff at the cafe.' -> 'I had a meeting with my boss and senior staffs at a cafe.'

5. 'After meeting,' -> 'After the meeting,'

6. 'I got off work with junior staff at 4:30 pm.' -> 'I got off work with my junior staffs at 4:30 pm.'

7. 'We transferred 1 time.' -> 'We only transferred once.'

8. 'We watched Chicago musical at the 다큐브아트센터.' -> 'We watched a musical, Chicago at 디큐브아트센터.'

9. 'We turned in Covid-19 questionhaire before show.' -> ??

10. 'Main actor's name was 최정원&티파니영.' -> '최정원 and Tiffany Young were on the show. They were the main actors.'

11. 'Most actor's costume was very sexy.' -> 'Their costumes were very sexy.'

[hichunhee]

9. We turned in Covid-19 questionhaire before show.' -> 쇼를 관람하기 전에 코로나19 문진표를 제출했다

-> 쓴게 많으니깐 고칠것도 많네요.T.T 수고 하셨습니다.

[shawn-hy1232]

1. We turned in Covid-19 questionhaire before show.' -> 쇼를 관람하기 전에 코로나19 문진표를 제출했다

-> 쓴게 많으니깐 고칠것도 많네요.T.T 수고 하셨습니다.

We turned in a questionnaire for Covid-19 before the show.

ㅎㅎ 아녜요~ 잘 쓰셨어요!!

[hichunhee]

Question :

'Their costumes were very sexy.'

'대부분 actor들이 sexy 하게 입었다' 라는 의미일때도

Their로 표현하나요?

[shawn-hy1232]

Question :

'Their costumes were very sexy.'

'대부분 actor들이 sexy 하게 입었다' 라는 의미일때도

Their로 표현하나요?

'그들의 코스튬은 섹시했다' 이니깐 their, 복수 소유격 형용사를 써야해요~^^