shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'I had a stocks. It was interested.' -> ??
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'Time was too fast.' -> 'The time went by so fast.'
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'But it's sad to think that I can't see my friends anymore.' -> Very Good
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'I have to do an internet interview with GGAC.' -> 'I have to do an online interview with GGAC.'
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'I want to study a lot Enlgish.' -> 'I want to study English a lot.'
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'Because I'm going to leave home soon.' -> 'Because I have to move out soon.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I got up at 9AM. After I took a shower, I went to work by subway. I had lunch at a restaurant. I am interested in stocks nowadays. So, I bought stocks. I had to study English. The time went by so fast. I put on makeup and I went to see my friends. We had a good time. And I came back home. It was nice today. I enjoy meeting my friends. But it's sad to think that I can't see my friends anymore. The day after tomorrow, I have to do an online interview with GGAC. I am nervous. I hope to have good results. I'm going to sleep now. I want to study Enlgish a lot. And tomorrow, I'm going to clean my house. Because I have to move out soon. Anyway, I hope to have fun tomorrow.