shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'It was early time for me.' -> 'It was early for me.'
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'I had a evening appointment.' -> 'I had an appointment in the evening.'
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'My workplace always haven't a lot of customers. However, it's too serious these days. Even today, I became an information desk employee. Anyway, Instead of the original employee, I worked with someone else. He gave me a coffee that he bought at the our bakery. I felt grateful for him. Until I left work, I talked daily of life with him. I was funny. My friend said me that you have to pay and work without getting paid. Haha. I agree that she told me.' -> 'Usually, there are not many customers at my work. However, there are a lot these days. Today, I felt like I was a information desk person. Anyway, there is this guy that I worked with today. I don't usually work with him at the same time, but I did today. He gave me coffee that he bought from a bakery near our work. I was very grateful for it. Until we finish the work, we talked a lot. We talked about our daily lives. It was fun. My friend told me that I should pay to work because I am having too much fun at work. I agree with her.'
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'My friends came to work. Because I left work.' -> ??
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'I first met my friends after I did graduation.' -> 'It was my first time meeting these friends since the graduation.'
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'I watched a cockroach.' -> 'I saw a cockroach.'
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'But Jane don't came home today.' -> 'But Jane is not coming home today.'
euiji
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up at 8AM. It was early for me. But I had to go to work at 10AM. So, I took a shower and I put on makeup because I had an appointment in the evening. Usually, there are not many customers at my work. However, there are even less today. Today, I felt like I was a information desk person. Anyway, there is this guy that I worked with today. I don't usually work with him at the same time, but I did today. He gave me coffee that he bought from a bakery near our work. I was very grateful for it. Until we finish the work, we talked a lot. We talked about our daily lives. It was fun. My friend told me that I should pay to work because I am having too much fun at work. I agree with her. My friends came to my workplace to see me. So, We went to 할맥 and Izakaya to drink. It was my second time drinking in Yeongdeungpo. I like to drink in Hongdae. It was my first time meeting these friends since the graduation. Anyway, We had a good time. I came back home. After I took a shower. Between the kitchen and utility room, I saw a cockroach. I hate bugs a lot. I missed Jane. But Jane is not coming home today. So, I wanted to sleep quickly. And I did it.