[Hailey] - 2021년 4월 29일

[euiji]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I was so busy today. I woke up at 7AM. Because I planned to sell my furniture. But the buyer didn't show up. So, I suggested Jane to have breakfast. Jane said yes. We went to Buttermilk Brunch cafe. It is a minute away from home. I had pancake, bacon, Fried egg, and honey strawberry yogurt. This was so good. I was really happy. And I went to see my dermatologist. I went to see my dermatologist once a week this month. And I studied English at Talk-talk. I waited for Jane. We had dinner. And We came back home. We sold a lot of furniture. Even today, it was difficult to prepare for moving. I'm so sleepy. I'm going to sleep now for tomorrow.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'There were so busy today.' -> 'I was so busy today.'

2. 'But there was no contact with buyer at the promised time.' -> 'But the buyer didn't show up.'

3. 'We went to the Buttermilk Brunch Cafe.' -> 'We went to Buttermilk Brunch cafe.'

4. 'And I went to a dermatology.' -> 'And I went to see my dermatologist.'

5. 'I went to a dermatology once a week this month.' -> 'I went to see my dermatologist once a week this month.'