Open hichunhee opened 3 years ago
Good!
'I was very stressed out in my office. Because I got a call from the regulator. I hand in data. Data was acquisition of one's own stock.' -> 'I got to work and I got a call from a regulatory institution. They asked me to hand in required documents. The documents contained information about acquisition of treasury stocks. So I sent them the documents. It is always so stressful to deal with them.'
'We talked about works in a long time.' -> 'We talked about each other's work for a long time.'
'So I feel better.' -> 'And I felt better.'
'I came back home at 11 in the afternoon.' -> 'I came back home at 11 at night.'
'I didn't homework, because I got a little drunk.' -> 'I didn't do my homework, because I got little drunk.'
Thanks a million.
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up early in the morning as usual. It was cloudy and chilly out today. I went to work by subway.
I got to work and I got a call from a regulatory institution. They asked me to hand in required documents. The documents contained information about acquisition of treasury stocks. So I sent them the documents. It is always so stressful to deal with them.
After I got off work, I met Byungho. We had chicken and beer. We talked about each other's work for a long time. And I felt better.
I came back home at 11 at night. I didn't do my homework, because I got little drunk.
I'II wake up early tomorrow. Because I have to do my homework, before I take English class.